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Writing 1IECP
Summer 2013Nikki Mattson
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Would you rather…
• Sleep every night in a human-sized nest
• OR
• Sleep every night in an underground tunnel?
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Agenda
• “because”
• Editing picture descriptions
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“Because”
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Race
• Example
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Editing Picture Descriptions
• Edit picture descriptions
• Comment on other student writings
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HW
• Final draft and Editing Log for picture description