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Lesson 37

SAT Identifying Sentence Errors

Introduction to The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn

What is SATIRE? Distribute booksOBJECTIVE: Students will be able to understand how prior experiences influence a writing style.

Today’s Agenda

Identifying Sentence Errors

***Almost half of the questions***

The Run-On Sentence The Sentence Fragment Error in the Case of a Noun or Pronoun Error in Subject-Verb Agreement Error in Pronoun-Number Agreement Error in the Tense or Form of a Verb Error in Logical Comparison Adjective and Adverb Confusion Error in Modification and Word Order Error in Parallelism Error in Diction

Common Grammar and Usage Errors

If one follows the discipline of Hatha Yoga, you know the importance of physical purification to render the body fit for the practice of higher meditation. No error What’s the error?▪ Shift in person, switching from “one” to “you”▪ Error must be in underlined part, so the answer

has to be B

Error, if there is one, must be in the underlined part of the sentence.

In my history class I learned why the American colonies opposed the British, how they organized the militia, and the work of the Continental Congress. No error What sounds funny?▪ The last part of the sentence – your ear

expects the pattern to be the same

Use your ear for the language.

Marilyn and I ran as fast as we could, but we missed our train, which made us late for work. No error Having trouble seeing the error?▪ Subject-verb agreement▪ Pronoun-antecedent problems▪ Misuse of adjectives and adverbs▪ Dangling modifiers▪ Go through each underlined section and test it.▪ “which” is the error because it is a pronoun and must have a

noun for its antecedent. The only available noun is train, but that doesn’t make sense (the train didn’t make us late – missing the train made us late).

Look first for the most common errors.

No error = 10%-20% Don’t start imagining errors. If no

obvious errors strike your eye and the sentence sounds natural to your ear, go with choice E.

Not every sentences contains an error.

Let’s Practice

SAT Question of the Day

We were already to leave for the

amusement park when John’s

car broke down; we were forced

to postpone our outing. No error

SAT Question of the Day

We were already to leave for the

amusement park when John’s

car broke down; we were forced

to postpone our outing. No error

SAT Question of the Day

By order of the Student

Council, the wearing of slacks

by we girls in school has

been permitted. No error.

SAT Question of the Day

By order of the Student Council,

the wearing of slacks by we girls

in school has been permitted. No

error. Error in CASE – should be “us” because it is working as the object of the preposition (Even if you don’t know these rules you know that “we girls” sounds weird!)

Do you Agree or Disagree?

http://www.polleverywhere.com/multiple_choice_polls/LTYwMTg3MjgzNQ

My surroundings have influenced who I am today.

Samuel Langhorne Clemens

1835-1910Born and raised in Missouri

Led group of pranksters

Samuel Langhorne Clemens

Left school at 12Printer, riverboat pilot, miner, newspaper reporter, lecturer

Changed name to Mark Twain – “safe waters”

Do you Agree or Disagree?

http://www.polleverywhere.com/multiple_choice_polls/MzYyNDI2MjAz

Mark Twain was a racist.

In the 1800s, what did the “n” word mean?

How has the meaning of the word changed?

NAACP 1957 “racial slurs” “belittling racial

designations”

NAACP current position “You don’t ban Mark

Twain – you explain Mark Twain! To study an idea is not necessarily to endorse the idea. Twain’s satirical novel accurately portrays a time in history – the 19th century—and one of its evils, slavery.”

"Huckleberry Finn" and the N-word - 60 Minutes - CBS News

The Controversy

Incident

By Countee Cullen

Once riding in old Baltimore,Heart-filled, head-filled with glee;I saw a BaltimoreanKeep looking straight at me.

Now I was eight and very small,And he was no whit bigger,And so I smiled, but he poked outHis tongue, and called me, "Nigger."

I saw the whole of BaltimoreFrom May until December;Of all the things that happened thereThat's all that I remember.

Do you Agree or Disagree?

http://www.polleverywhere.com/multiple_choice_polls/LTIwNDAxNjYzMDQ

The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn should be banned.

The Adventures of Huck Finn

improper grammar

hypocritical religion

rule-breaking kids

What makes this funny? The “extra” is the

singer’s arrest record and it is a long, long, long paper.

What makes this not-so-funny? It’s a sad, but TRUE,

account of many who have found fame and fortune. They have also found themselves in trouble with the law.

Who is the target of the satire? Famous

people/musicians

What makes this funny? Teenager believes her

teacher knows nothing about spelling and is revealing her own ignorance.

What makes this not-so-funny?

True story: I had a junior who turned in an essay that contained texting lingo (“y” instead of “why,” “b/c” instead of “because,” and

Who’s the target of the satire?

teenagers

Your Very Own Book!Write your name on the first page.You should also write your name on the side of the pages so your book is easy to spot.

Front Cover Back Cover

themes literary techniques

Exit Slip

What should we do with the “n-word”? Should we retain the literary value and just say it? Should we say “n-word”? Should we say “slave”?