高三英语作文讲评（一）Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.

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假设你是李华，暑假期间，作为交换生，你在英国 Hans 家居住过。请你根据以下要点给 Hans 写一封邮件，主要内容如下：1. 感谢他带你到处参观以及招待的可口的饭菜；2. 邀请他 2015 年来中国观看将在福建举办的第八届城市运动会（ the Eighth National City Games ），并承诺带他去北京游览。

注意：1.短文次数不少于 100 ；2信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；3可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

学生习作中的错误语句1. I’m very miss you.----I miss you very much

2.Now, I invite you to come to China to

take part in the Eighth National City Games

which will hold in Fujian, China.

I’d like to invite

用词不当 watch

语态不当 will be held 或将 which will hold 改为 To be held

3.I’ll invite you come to China, watch the

Eighth National City Games in Fujian, on 2015.

4.Thanks for taking me visited everywhere of

some famous scenic spots located in England.

to come watching

in

to visit

5.I will take you to visit Beijing where lots of

ancient buildings, such as Tian’anmen Square,

Gu Gong and so on. 6.I’m looking forward to you can arrive in here.

7.I never forget that we visited historical sites

and scenic spots.

there are

The Palace Museum

your coming

the days when

8.I think your mother cooked food is really

delicious.

9.Though staied in your room for a few days,

but I can’t forget that beautiful time.

10.I had a good impress by your hospitable

the food (that) your mother cooked

having stayed

去掉

impression on hospitality

Ji Yang’s composition:Dear Hans,

How are you? I have arrived at home for a long time. I miss you very much and I feel like expressing my thanks to you. I still remember those days when I stayed with you, during which you showed me around many places of interest that are famous all over the world. What made me happy is the delicious food you offered me. I’d like to show my thanks again.

In addition, I desire to invite you to the Eighth National City Games in Fujian Province in China, in 2015. Hearing about your interest in Chinese culture when I was in England, I thought only if you came to China could you learn about Chinese culture well. It is the reason why I want to invite you to China. What’s more, I will lead you to Beijing for a visit if you are at my request. Hopefully you can come to China as planned.

Yours, Li hua

One possible version:Dear Hans, How are you? Hope you are fine. I will never forget the days when I stayed at your home last summer vacation. I can’t thank you too much for your kindness for your showing me around and introducing British history to me. Besides, the delicious food that you treated me to made the deepest impression on me.

As is well known, the Eighth National City Games will be held in Fujian Province in China in 2015. I’d like to invite you to come to watch your favourite sports events. After that, I am going to take you to pay a visit to Beijing, where there are many places of interest, such as the Great Wall. I think the visit will help you know more about Chinese culture and history. Hopefully you can come to China as planned.

Yours, Li hua

课下训练 假定你是李华，你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会，请你写信邀请外教 Susan 参加，要点包括： 1. 时间：周五晚 8 点至 9 点。 2. 地点：学生俱乐部。 3. 内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等。 4. 要求：备小礼物。 注意： 1. 词数 100 字左右，开头语已为你写好； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；