高考英语作文句式提升

什么样的作文是一篇好作文 • 无遗漏信息点（审题）• 篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词• 句式多样• 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组

思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？

推荐高考写作 10 种句式一、主动句与被动句的互换。 1. People grow rice in the south of China.

Rice is grown in the south of China.

2. They have printed one and a half million copies of the dictionary since 1986.

One and a half million copies of the dictionary have been printed since 1986.

二、将陈述句改为倒装句。1. I could hardly understand the importance

of English at that time.

Hardly could I understand the importance of English at that time.

2. We did not realize our mistakes until at that time.

Not until at that time did we realize our mistakes.

三、将简单句改为强调句1. Smoking did great harm to his health. It was smoking that did great harm to

his health. 2. Our money is earned through hard

work by our parents. It is through hard work that our money

is earned by our parents.3. He went there yesterday. He did go there yesterday.

四、将两个简单句合并为并列句

1. You can do it. I can do it. One of us must do it.

you I must do it.

2. I want to buy this bike. I don’t have enough money.

I want to buy this bike, I don't have enough money.

Either or

but

五、将两个简单句合并为复合句1. 同位语和同位语从句1) Liu Xiang is an excellent athlete. He won

the first prize in Men’s 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games.

________, __________________, won the first prize in Men’s 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games.

2) The word is true. The president will give our school a speech.

___ is true _____ the president will give our school a speech.

Liu Xiang an excellent athlete

It that

2. 定语从句 1) The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing, and its

slogan is One World, One Dream,

The 2008 Olympic Games, ________________________

__________________________2) In my opinion, the Great Wall and the Summer Palace

are well worth visiting.

In my opinion, the Great Wall and the Summer Palace

__________________________________________

3) Yesterday, we went to the East Gate, and we bought a lot of clothes.

Yesterday, we went to the East Gate, _______________

____________

One Dream, will be held in Beijing.

are the two places which are well worth visiting.

where we bought a

Whose slogan is One World,

lot of clothes.

3. 主语从句1) His wonderful performance on the stage

impressed me. most was his wonderful

performance on the stage.2) It satisfied me. The dining hall provides us with

a large variety of kinds of dishes. the dining hall provides

us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.3) I learned from the story that as long as we have

patience, confidence and perseverance, we can realize our dreams.

as long as we have patience, confidence and perseverance, we can realize our dreams.

What impressed me

What satisfied me is that

What I have learnt from the story is that

推荐句型• What surprises \ astonished \ satisfied \

impressed me is that…

• What I would like to suggest \ advise \ put forward is that…

• What matters most is that …

• What I learn\conclude from the story is that…

4. 表语从句推荐句型： …is no longer what it used to be.

1) 我的家乡不再像以前那样了。 My hometown is no longer what it used

to be.

2) 他不再是以前那样了。 He is no longer what he used to be.

5. 状语从句

结果、程度 so…that …; such …that…

让步 no matter how\ what\ when \ where…. =whatever, however, whenever, wherever

时间 … was doing…when …, as soon as, the moment, the next time, every time

1) 不管前面有多少困难，我们都要学会独立的克服他们。

________________________________

______________, we should learn to overcome them independently.

2) 我正沿着马路走，突然我听到有人叫我。 I ____________ along the road ______

suddenly I heard my name called.

No matter how many difficulties there

was walking when

are ahead of us,

六、将两个简单句合并为一个由 which 引导的非限制性定语从句1. Recently many students spend their money on

unnecessary things. Different people have different opinions about it.

Recently many students spend their money on unnecessary things, about different people have different opinions.

2. Many boys learn to smoke. It does harm to their health.

Many boys learn to smoke, ________________ _______________

which

which does harm to

their health.

七、 it 作形式主语或形式宾语句型

1. You pretend to know what you don’t know. It’s no good.

It’s no good pretending to know what you don’t know.

2. It is easy to get on with Pam. I find.

I find it easy to get on with Pam.

八、分词结构代替状语从句

1. If you work harder, you will do better in the exam next time.

______________, you will do better in the exam next time.

2. Because my friend was frightened of losing his job, he said nothing to the police.

_______________________, my friend said nothing to the police.

Working hard

Frightened of losing his job

九、 with 引导的短语或者复合结构• With + 宾语 + adj./ adv./ 介词短语 / to

do\doing\done

• 常用句型• with a population of….

• with a total area of…

• with a long history of… years

1) 这个地区占地 2000 平方千米，人口 10 万。 This area covers an area of 2000 square

kilometers, ________________________

2) 我们学校周围种了很多花，吸引了大量的学生来参观。

_________________________________, it attracts a large number of people.

3) 我们学校是一所有 100 多年历史的名校。 Our school is a famous one __________

______________________

with a population of 100,000.

With many flowers surrounding our school

with a history of over 100 years.

4 ）没有做完作业，这个小孩不敢去上学。

___________________________, the

boy dared not go to school.

5) 这两个男人早早就睡了，蜡烛烧了一晚上。

The two men went to bed early, _______

_____________________________.

6) 他睡觉的时候嘴巴张得大大的。

He sleep ______________________.

with candles burning a night long

With homework not finished

with his mouth wide open

实战操练：最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。

60% 的同学认为1 、不应收门票2 、公园是公众休闲的地方3 、如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象

40% 的同学认为1 、应收门票，但票价不宜高 2 、支付园林工人工资3 、购新花木

注意：1 、信的开头已为你写好2 、参考词汇：门票： entrance fee

1． 60％的同学认为公园不应该收费。 • Sixty percent of the students think that the

park should not charge entrance fees． ＝ Sixty percent of the students hold the

view that entrance fees should not be charged ．被动句＝ Sixty percent of the students have the

idea that people should be allowed to enter parks without charge.

＝ In the opinion of 60％ of the students, people can enter parks for free．

2．公园是公众休闲的地方。

A park is a place for the public to rest and enjoy themselves．

＝ A park is a place where people rest and relax． 定语从句

3．如收门票，需建大门﹑围墙，会影响城市形象。

• If entrance fees are charged, it will be necessary to build gates and walls, which will affect the appearance of the city． （ which指代上文）

＝With entrance fees charged, it will be necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of the city．

4． 40% 的同学认为应收门票， 但票价不宜高。

40％ of the students think that entrance fees are necessary, but the prices should not be high．

＝ There are 40％ of the students who think that entrance fees should be charged, but fees should be low．（定语从句）

＝ In the opinion of 40％ of the students, entrance fees should be charged low．

5．门票收入支付园林工人工资﹑购买新花木。

The income from entrance fees is used to pay the gardeners and buy new plants and flowers．

＝ The money from entrance fees is made use of to pay garden workers and buy new plants．

＝With money from entrance fees, the gardeners are paid and new plants as well as young trees are bought． （ With 的短语）（被动句）

Dear Editor, Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of

the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believed a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Without doubt, Charging entrance fees will keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.