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Write Tight(er): A Time-Saving, Pain-Free Technique for Selling Yourself, Your Company, or Your Products through Your WordsTRANSCRIPT
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Write Tight (er) Marcia Riefer Johnston
A Time-Saving, Pain-Free Technique for Selling
Yourself, Your Company, or Your Products through
Your Words
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Quick, which ad would you call
concise?
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What does conciseness mean (and not mean)?
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What does conciseness mean (and not mean)?
How much difference can conciseness make?
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What does conciseness mean (and not mean)?
How much difference can conciseness make?
In what ways does conciseness help me sell?
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What does conciseness mean (and not mean)?
How much difference can conciseness make?
In what ways does conciseness help me sell?
How can I write more concisely?
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What does conciseness mean (and not mean)?
Time-saving, pain-free technique
How much difference can conciseness make?
In what ways does conciseness help me sell?
How can I write more concisely?
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What does conciseness mean (and not mean)?
Time-saving, pain-free technique
How much difference can conciseness make?
In what ways does conciseness help me sell?
How can I write more concisely?
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What does conciseness mean (and not mean)?
Time-saving, pain-free technique
How much difference can conciseness make?
In what ways does conciseness help me sell?
How can I write more concisely?
WORKSHOP BREAK
Three-minute video
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No headline?
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No headline?
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No headline?
No bullets? No
verbiage?
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No headline?
No bullets? No
verbiage?
How concise!
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#ICCSJ2014
No headline?
No bullets? No
verbiage?
How concise!
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WordsWordsWordsWords
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What does conciseness mean (and not mean)?
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Minimalism
What does conciseness mean (and not mean)?
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Concise means “minimal.”
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Concise means “minimal.”Not short.
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Concise means “minimal.”Not short.
“Cut me a short string.”
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Concise means “minimal.”Not short.
“Cut me a short string.” Huh?
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Concise means “minimal.”Not short.
“Cut me a short string.” Huh?
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Concise means “minimal.”Not short.
“Cut me a short string.”
Make text (like string) as long as needed.
Huh?
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Concise means “minimal.”
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Not robospeak.
Concise means “minimal.”
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Not robospeak.
Concise means “minimal.”
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Not robospeak.
Push button.
Concise means “minimal.”
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Not robospeak.
Push button. Push the button.
Concise means “minimal.”
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Not robospeak.
Keep the the.
Push button. Push the button.
Concise means “minimal.”
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Concise means “minimal.”
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Not gutted for mobile.
Concise means “minimal.”
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Not gutted for mobile.
Concise means “minimal.”
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Not gutted for mobile.
Don’t think, “Smartphone users won’t need that.”
Concise means “minimal.”
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Not gutted for mobile.
They will.
Don’t think, “Smartphone users won’t need that.”
Concise means “minimal.”
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Not gutted for mobile.
They will.
Don’t think, “Smartphone users won’t need that.”
Concise means “minimal.”
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Example
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Example
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No discussion board?
Example
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No discussion board?
No calendar?
Example
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Concise ≠ Gutted
No discussion board?
No calendar?
Example
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Minimal.
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Minimal.
Enough to meet your audiences’ needs
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Minimal.
Enough to meet your audiences’ needs
Enough to accomplish your purpose
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Minimal.
Enough to meet your audiences’ needs
Enough to accomplish your purpose
No more
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Minimal.
Enough to meet your audiences’ needs
Enough to accomplish your purpose
No more No less
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Write Tight(er): A Time-Saving, Pain-Free
Technique for Selling Yourself, Your Company, or Your
Products through Your Words
HowToWriteEverything.com @MarciaRJohnston
Audience needs: “What’s in it for me?”
Write Tight(er): A Time-Saving, Pain-Free
Technique for Selling Yourself, Your Company, or Your
Products through Your Words
HowToWriteEverything.com @MarciaRJohnston
Audience needs: “What’s in it for me?”
My purpose: Get you here
Write Tight(er): A Time-Saving, Pain-Free
Technique for Selling Yourself, Your Company, or Your
Products through Your Words
HowToWriteEverything.com @MarciaRJohnston
No more
Audience needs: “What’s in it for me?”
My purpose: Get you here
Write Tight(er): A Time-Saving, Pain-Free
Technique for Selling Yourself, Your Company, or Your
Products through Your Words
HowToWriteEverything.com @MarciaRJohnston
No more No less
Audience needs: “What’s in it for me?”
My purpose: Get you here
Write Tight(er): A Time-Saving, Pain-Free
Technique for Selling Yourself, Your Company, or Your
Products through Your Words
HowToWriteEverything.com @MarciaRJohnston
HowToWriteEverything.com @MarciaRJohnston
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How much difference can conciseness make?
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How much difference can conciseness make?
“Measured usability was dramatically higher for the concise version [of the website]—58% better.” !
Nielsen Norman Group www.nngroup.com/articles/
how-users-read-on-the-web
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In what ways does conciseness help me sell?
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Small screens
In what ways does conciseness help me sell?
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Small screens
Translation costs
In what ways does conciseness help me sell?
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Small screens
Translation costs
Readability
In what ways does conciseness help me sell?
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Small screens
Translation costs
Readability
Think usability, engagement.
In what ways does conciseness help me sell?
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“But I don’t write for small screens.”
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“But I don’t write for small screens.”
Maybe your readers see a big window.
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... or maybe your readers see this.
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... or maybe your readers see this.
“Full site” view
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... or maybe your readers see this.
“Full site” view
“Mobile site” view
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“But I don’t write for small screens.”
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Maybe your readers see this.
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“But I already write concisely.”This is your toothbrush when it’s new. The blue bristles are blue all the way to their tips.
This is your toothbrush when it’s ready to replace. The blue bristles have turned half white.
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“But I already write concisely.”This is your toothbrush when it’s new. The blue bristles are blue all the way to their tips.
This is your toothbrush when it’s ready to replace. The blue bristles have turned half white.
Visual-verbal redundancy
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Your readers want this.
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Especially if you translate.
Philips Sonicare™ toothbrush
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“But my stuff isn’t translated.”
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“But my stuff isn’t translated.”
Get ready!
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How much can a word cost?
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You may be needing a loan.
How much can a word cost?
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You may be needing a loan.
How much can a word cost?words6
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You may be needing a loan.
How much can a word cost?words6
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You may be needing a loan.
How much can a word cost?
You may need a loan.
words6
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You may be needing a loan.
How much can a word cost?
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
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You may be needing a loan.
How much can a word cost?
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
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You may be needing a loan.
How much can a word cost?
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
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You may be needing a loan.
How much can a word cost?
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
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You may be needing a loan.
How much can a word cost?
Translation cost (or savings):
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
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You may be needing a loan.
How much can a word cost?
Translation cost (or savings):
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
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You may be needing a loan.
How much can a word cost?
Translation cost (or savings):
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
1 sentence, 1 language
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You may be needing a loan.
How much can a word cost?
Translation cost (or savings):
$ 0.25
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
1 sentence, 1 language
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You may be needing a loan.
How much can a word cost?
Translation cost (or savings):
$ 0.25
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
10,000 sentences,* 1 language
1 sentence, 1 language
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You may be needing a loan.
How much can a word cost?
Translation cost (or savings):
$ 0.25
* the size of a Harry Potter novel
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
10,000 sentences,* 1 language
1 sentence, 1 language
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You may be needing a loan.
How much can a word cost?
Translation cost (or savings):
$ 0.25
* the size of a Harry Potter novel
$ 2,500.00
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
10,000 sentences,* 1 language
1 sentence, 1 language
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You may be needing a loan.
How much can a word cost?
Translation cost (or savings):
$ 0.25
* the size of a Harry Potter novel
$ 2,500.00
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
10,000 sentences,* 25 languages
10,000 sentences,* 1 language
1 sentence, 1 language
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You may be needing a loan.
How much can a word cost?
Translation cost (or savings):
$ 0.25
* the size of a Harry Potter novel
$ 2,500.00
$ 62,500.00
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
10,000 sentences,* 25 languages
10,000 sentences,* 1 language
1 sentence, 1 language
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You may be needing a loan.
How much can a word cost?
Translation cost (or savings):
$ 0.25
* the size of a Harry Potter novel
$ 2,500.00
$ 62,500.00
You may need a loan.
words6
5 words
1 word
10,000 sentences,* 25 languages
10,000 sentences,* 1 language
1 sentence, 1 language
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a word? How so?
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a word? How so?
Close enough
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a word? How so?
Close enough
Varies with the language
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a word? How so?
Close enough
Varies with the language
Depends on the translation memory (database)
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a word? How so?
Close enough
Varies with the language
Depends on the translation memory (database) unrecognized word
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a word? How so?
Close enough
Varies with the language
Depends on the translation memory (database) unrecognized word
Full price
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a word? How so?
Close enough
Varies with the language
Depends on the translation memory (database) unrecognized word “fuzzy” match Full price
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a word? How so?
Close enough
Varies with the language
Depends on the translation memory (database) unrecognized word “fuzzy” match Full price
Pay less
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a word? How so?
Close enough
Varies with the language
Depends on the translation memory (database) unrecognized word “fuzzy” match “perfect” match
Full price
Pay less
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a word? How so?
Close enough
Varies with the language
Depends on the translation memory (database) unrecognized word “fuzzy” match “perfect” match
You still pay!
Full price
Pay less
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Whether or not you translate,
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Whether or not you translate,
whatever size your page or screen,
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Whether or not you translate,
whatever size your page or screen,
you owe it to yourself to ask …
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How can I write more concisely?
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Dump these words!*
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Dump these words!**unless you need them
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Dump these words!**unless you need them
Time-saving, pain-free technique
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are)
Dump these words!**unless you need them
Time-saving, pain-free technique
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are)-ly words (& other vapid adverbs)
Dump these words!**unless you need them
Time-saving, pain-free technique
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are)-ly words (& other vapid adverbs)very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers)
Dump these words!**unless you need them
Time-saving, pain-free technique
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are)-ly words (& other vapid adverbs)very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers)not, no (& other negative words)
Dump these words!**unless you need them
Time-saving, pain-free technique
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are)-ly words (& other vapid adverbs)very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers)not, no (& other negative words)the fact that
Dump these words!**unless you need them
Time-saving, pain-free technique
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are)-ly words (& other vapid adverbs)very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers)not, no (& other negative words)the fact thatjust
Dump these words!**unless you need them
Time-saving, pain-free technique
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are)-ly words (& other vapid adverbs)very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers)not, no (& other negative words)the fact thatjustbegin to, try to, tend to, in order to
Dump these words!**unless you need them
Time-saving, pain-free technique
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are)-ly words (& other vapid adverbs)very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers)not, no (& other negative words)the fact thatjustbegin to, try to, tend to, in order toperiod of time
Dump these words!**unless you need them
Time-saving, pain-free technique
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are)-ly words (& other vapid adverbs)very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers)not, no (& other negative words)the fact thatjustbegin to, try to, tend to, in order toperiod of time in light of, in spite of, in terms of (& of in general)
Dump these words!**unless you need them
Time-saving, pain-free technique
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are)-ly words (& other vapid adverbs)very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers)not, no (& other negative words)the fact thatjustbegin to, try to, tend to, in order toperiod of time in light of, in spite of, in terms of (& of in general)proverbial
Dump these words!**unless you need them
Time-saving, pain-free technique
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are)-ly words (& other vapid adverbs)very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers)not, no (& other negative words)the fact thatjustbegin to, try to, tend to, in order toperiod of time in light of, in spite of, in terms of (& of in general)proverbialdifferent (as in many different, 36 different)
Dump these words!**unless you need them
Time-saving, pain-free technique
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are)-ly words (& other vapid adverbs)very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers)not, no (& other negative words)the fact thatjustbegin to, try to, tend to, in order toperiod of time in light of, in spite of, in terms of (& of in general)proverbialdifferent (as in many different, 36 different)particular
Dump these words!**unless you need them
Time-saving, pain-free technique
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are)-ly words (& other vapid adverbs)very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers)not, no (& other negative words)the fact thatjustbegin to, try to, tend to, in order toperiod of time in light of, in spite of, in terms of (& of in general)proverbialdifferent (as in many different, 36 different)particularverbiage
Dump these words!**unless you need them
Time-saving, pain-free technique
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are)-ly words (& other vapid adverbs)very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers)not, no (& other negative words)the fact thatjustbegin to, try to, tend to, in order toperiod of time in light of, in spite of, in terms of (& of in general)proverbialdifferent (as in many different, 36 different)particularverbiageany other verbiage or unneeded words that you can pitch
Dump these words!**unless you need them
Time-saving, pain-free technique
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are)-ly words (& other vapid adverbs)very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers)not, no (& other negative words)the fact thatjustbegin to, try to, tend to, in order toperiod of time in light of, in spite of, in terms of (& of in general)proverbialdifferent (as in many different, 36 different)particularverbiageany other verbiage or unneeded words that you can pitch
Dump these words!**unless you need them
Time-saving, pain-free technique
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are)-ly words (& other vapid adverbs)very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers)not, no (& other negative words)the fact thatjustbegin to, try to, tend to, in order toperiod of time in light of, in spite of, in terms of (& of in general)proverbialdifferent (as in many different, 36 different)particularverbiageany other verbiage or unneeded words that you can pitch
Dump these words!**unless you need them
Time-saving, pain-free technique
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are)-ly words (& other vapid adverbs)very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers)not, no (& other negative words)the fact thatjustbegin to, try to, tend to, in order toperiod of time in light of, in spite of, in terms of (& of in general)proverbialdifferent (as in many different, 36 different)particularverbiageany other verbiage or unneeded words that you can pitch
Dump these words!**unless you need them
Time-saving, pain-free technique
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See be-verbs.
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See be-verbs.
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See be-verbs.
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See be-verbs.
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Examples
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“Bias tape has the advantage of being able to be applied smoothly around curves as well as straight.”
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“Bias tape has the advantage of being able to be applied smoothly around curves as well as straight.”
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“Bias tape has the advantage of being able to be applied smoothly around curves as well as straight.”
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“Bias tape has the advantage of being able to be applied smoothly around curves as well as straight.”
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The fix might not be self-evident.
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The fix might not be self-evident.
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The fix might not be self-evident.
You have to think.
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The fix might not be self-evident.
You have to think.
(Not too painful.)
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“A scheme of which every part promises delight can never be successful.”
—Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
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“A scheme of which every part promises delight can never be successful.”
—Jane Austen, Pride and Prejudice
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Our IT team wants to be predictive.
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Our IT team wants to be predictive.
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Our IT team wants to be predictive.
What does the team
want to do?
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“Write when there is something that you know; and not before; and not too damned much after.”
—Ernest Hemingway
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“Write when there is something that you know; and not before; and not too damned much after.”
—Ernest Hemingway
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“ There are known knowns. These are things we know that we know. There are known unknowns. That is to say, there are things
that we know we don’t know. But there are also unknown unknowns. There are things
we don’t know we don’t know.” (attributed to a one-time US secretary of defense)
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“ There are known knowns. These are things we know that we know. There are known unknowns. That is to say, there are things
that we know we don’t know. But there are also unknown unknowns. There are things
we don’t know we don’t know.” (attributed to a one-time US secretary of defense)
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“ There are known knowns. These are things we know that we know. There are known unknowns. That is to say, there are things
that we know we don’t know. But there are also unknown unknowns. There are things
we don’t know we don’t know.” (attributed to a one-time US secretary of defense)
We don’t know diddly—
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“ There are known knowns. These are things we know that we know. There are known unknowns. That is to say, there are things
that we know we don’t know. But there are also unknown unknowns. There are things
we don’t know we don’t know.” (attributed to a one-time US secretary of defense)
We don’t know diddly—except to avoid be-verbs.
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See be-verbs.
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See be-verbs.
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are)
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are)
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-ly words (& other vapid adverbs)
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Jane fully expects a big publisher to snap up her first novel.
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Jane fully expects a big publisher to snap up her first novel.
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Please listen carefully to the following choices so that we can immediately direct your call to the appropriate person.
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Please listen carefully to the following choices so that we can immediately direct your call to the appropriate person.
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Please listen carefully to the following choices so that we can immediately direct your call to the appropriate person.
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very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers)
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Fred likes his toast very dry.
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Fred likes his toast very dry.
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Fred likes his toast very dry.
Fred likes his toast so dry.
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Fred likes his toast very dry.
Fred likes his toast so dry.
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Fred likes his toast very dry.
Fred likes his toast so dry.
Fred likes such dry toast.
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Fred likes his toast very dry.
Fred likes his toast so dry.
Fred likes such dry toast.
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not, no (& other negative words)
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Do not use negative phrasing.
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Do not use negative phrasing.
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The Oregon Ducks have not lost a “Civil War” game to their archrivals, the Beavers, in seven years.
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The Oregon Ducks have not lost a “Civil War” game to their archrivals, the Beavers, in seven years.
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The Oregon Ducks have not lost a “Civil War” game to their archrivals, the Beavers, in seven years.
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The Oregon Ducks have not lost a “Civil War” game to their archrivals, the Beavers, in seven years.
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the fact that
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Given the fact that Joan had read up on topic-based writing before her group installed the content-management system, everyone went to her with questions.
Concept Task Reference
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Given the fact that Joan had read up on topic-based writing before her group installed the content-management system, everyone went to her with questions.
Concept Task Reference
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just
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It's just that I just say just a lot. I just have the habit, so it’s just hard to stop saying it.
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It's just that I just say just a lot. I just have the habit, so it’s just hard to stop saying it.
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begin to, try to, tend to, in order to
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Michael Noer handed the six-year-old the tablet. With no instruction, and never having seen a computer, the boy began to swipe the screen, launch apps, and play a pinball game.
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Michael Noer handed the six-year-old the tablet. With no instruction, and never having seen a computer, the boy began to swipe the screen, launch apps, and play a pinball game.
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Try to focus on breathing.
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Try to focus on breathing.
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“Stop trying to hit me, and hit me.” —Morpheus to Neo
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“Do or do not. There is no try.”
—Yoda
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“When our tools don’t work, we tend to blame ourselves for being too stupid or not reading the manual or having too fat fingers.”
—Lev Grossman, Time
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“When our tools don’t work, we tend to blame ourselves for being too stupid or not reading the manual or having too fat fingers.”
—Lev Grossman, Time
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In order to divert 34,000 tons of food scraps from landfills, Portland created a curbside-pickup program for compostable waste.
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In order to divert 34,000 tons of food scraps from landfills, Portland created a curbside-pickup program for compostable waste.
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period of time
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Jones and Caruthers have worked here for a long period of time.
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Jones and Caruthers have worked here for a long period of time.
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are) -ly words (& other vapid adverbs) very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers) not, no (& other negative words) the fact that just begin to, try to, tend to, in order to period of time
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are) -ly words (& other vapid adverbs) very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers) not, no (& other negative words) the fact that just begin to, try to, tend to, in order to period of time
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in light of, in spite of, in terms of (& of in general)
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In light of my lack of cash, we stopped at an ATM.
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In light of my lack of cash, we stopped at an ATM.
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In light of my lack of cash, we stopped at an ATM.
In spite of his poor health, Samuel attended his niece’s graduation.
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In light of my lack of cash, we stopped at an ATM.
In spite of his poor health, Samuel attended his niece’s graduation.
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In light of my lack of cash, we stopped at an ATM.
In spite of his poor health, Samuel attended his niece’s graduation.
I prefer that TV in terms of cost.
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In light of my lack of cash, we stopped at an ATM.
In spite of his poor health, Samuel attended his niece’s graduation.
I prefer that TV in terms of cost.
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“The word of is, in anything other than small doses, among the surest indications of flabby writing.”
—Bryan Garner Garner’s Modern American Usage
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“The word of is, in anything other than small doses, among the surest indications of flabby writing.”
—Bryan Garner Garner’s Modern American Usage
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are) -ly words (& other vapid adverbs) very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers) not, no (& other negative words) the fact that just begin to, try to, tend to, in order to period of time in light of, in spite of, in terms of (& of in general)
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proverbial
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different (as in many different, 36 different)
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Our company understands the pros and cons of all these different technologies.
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Our company understands the pros and cons of all these different technologies.
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Steve Jobs’s name appears on 212 different Apple patents.
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Steve Jobs’s name appears on 212 different Apple patents.
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weak be-verbs (is, was, were, will be, have been, am, are) -ly words (& other vapid adverbs) very, such, so (& other empty intensifiers) not, no (& other negative words) the fact that just begin to, try to, tend to, in order to period of time in light of, in spite of, in terms of (& of in general) proverbial different (as in many different, 36 different)
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particular
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Google’s CEO, Eric Schmidt, has a particular belief that Android’s open platform leads to more options and more consumer choice.
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Google’s CEO, Eric Schmidt, has a particular belief that Android’s open platform leads to more options and more consumer choice.
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verbiage
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We’ll throw some verbiage in there.
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We’ll throw some verbiage in there.
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Your content needs updating.
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Your content needs updating.
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Updates are needed to your content.
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Your content needs updating.
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Updates are needed to your content.
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Updates are needed to your content.
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Your content needs updating.
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Updates are needed to your content.
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Your content needs updating.
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It’s worth noting that most readers do not want to wade through huge volumes of information to find what they need.
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It’s worth noting that most readers do not want to wade through huge volumes of information to find what they need.
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It’s worth noting that most readers do not want to wade through huge volumes of information to find what they need.
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It’s worth noting that most readers do not want to wade through huge volumes of information to find what they need.
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It’s worth noting that most readers do not want to wade through huge volumes of information to find what they need.
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It’s worth noting that most readers do not want to wade through huge volumes of information to find what they need.
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It’s worth noting that most readers do not want to wade through huge volumes of information to find what they need.
Nobody wants to wade through volumes.
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It’s worth noting that most readers do not want to wade through huge volumes of information to find what they need.
Nobody wants to wade through volumes.
15-word reduction x 10,000 sentences x 25 languages saves ...
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It’s worth noting that most readers do not want to wade through huge volumes of information to find what they need.
Nobody wants to wade through volumes.
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It’s worth noting that most readers do not want to wade through huge volumes of information to find what they need.
Nobody wants to wade through volumes.
15-word reduction x 10,000 sentences x 25 languages saves ...
A cool mill.$ 937,500.00
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This is your toothbrush when it’s new. The blue bristles are blue all the way to their tips.
This is your toothbrush when it’s ready to replace. The blue bristles have turned half white.
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This is your toothbrush when it’s new. The blue bristles are blue all the way to their tips.
This is your toothbrush when it’s ready to replace. The blue bristles have turned half white.
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This is your toothbrush when it’s new. The blue bristles are blue all the way to their tips.
This is your toothbrush when it’s ready to replace. The blue bristles have turned half white.
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This is your toothbrush when it’s new. The blue bristles are blue all the way to their tips.
This is your toothbrush when it’s ready to replace. The blue bristles have turned half white.
Bet you didn’t miss the headline I deleted.
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It’s mind-boggling to consider what TIGHTENING that
dramatic would do to IMPROVES KEYWORD DENSITY.
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It’s mind-boggling to consider what TIGHTENING that
dramatic would do to IMPROVES KEYWORD DENSITY.
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It’s mind-boggling to consider what TIGHTENING that
dramatic would do to IMPROVES KEYWORD DENSITY.
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It’s mind-boggling to consider what TIGHTENING that
dramatic would do to IMPROVES KEYWORD DENSITY.
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Adjectives • absolutely certain, absolutely essential, absolutely
guaranteed, completely necessary, totally sure • bald-headed • best ever, first ever • blue in color, few in number, long in duration, nubbly in
texture, round in shape, slovenly in appearance, short in height, slow in speed, small in size, tall in stature
• booked solid • exact same, same exact, same identical • filled to capacity • incredible to believe, visible to the eye, warm to the touch
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Nouns • actual experience, actual fact • added bonus • advance notice, advance planning, advance preview,
advance reservations, advance warning • all-time favorite, all-time record • alternative choice • anonymous stranger • annual anniversary • armed gunman • artificial prosthesis • autobiography of her own life, biography of his life
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Nouns • actual experience, actual fact • added bonus • advance notice, advance planning, advance preview,
advance reservations, advance warning • all-time favorite, all-time record • alternative choice • anonymous stranger • annual anniversary • armed gunman • artificial prosthesis • autobiography of her own life, biography of his life
And that’s just the a’s.
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Verbs • add an additional • aid and abet, cease and desist, pick and choose • allow you to be able to • always include • ask the question • assemble together, attach together, blend together,
collaborate together, combine together, confer together, connect together, cooperate together, fuse together, gather together, join together, integrate together, meet together, merge together, mingle together, mix together, pool together, share together, splice together
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Odds and Ends
• 6 a.m. in the morning, 10 p.m. in the evening, twelve noon, twelve midnight
• and etc.
• ATM machine, GOP party, GRE exam, HIV virus, ISBN number, LCD display, PIN number, RAM memory, UPC code—and my favorite: Please RSVP
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Visual-verbal redundancy
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HA-llo. DEE-na. DEES eez your MAH-ther.
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YOUR WORDS
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Story time
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Story time
Water dispenser
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Story time
Water dispenser
Buttons
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Story time
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Quick reference
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Looks easy enough.
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Concise = good ... right?
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Ready for a video?
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