Week 4 - writing essays - topic sentences
Post on 17-May-2015
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DESCRIPTIONThis set of slides has feedback on your essays. It looks at structure, particularly topic sentences. It also gives examples of common mistakes with prepositions from your essays.
- 1. Week 4 4 tips for writing smoothly
2. Word choice feedback
3. Fill in the blanks
North of Tokyo (..)
in northern Tokyo(..)
south of Japan (.)
in the south of Japan (.)
Located the middle of
The Sumidagawa runs .. Asakusa.
Yokohama is Tokyo Bay
Chiba has the same climate ( .) Tokyo.
4. Correcting the sentences
- It is near the sea,
5. important place for tourism 6. It has the same climate as Japan. 7. Sometimes it snows 8. Hokkaido is the north of Japan. 9. centre of Japanese industry or 10. industrial centre of Japan 11. It is near to the sea 12. important place of tourism 13. It has the same climate which Japan has. 14. Sometimes it is snow. 15. Hokkaido is the north of Japan. 16. centre of the Japans industry