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Table of Contents:
Foreword: pg. 1
Chaucer Character Essay: pg. 3
Beowulf Compare and Contrast: pg. 5
Diary Project: pg. 8
Modest Proposal Essay: pg. 10
Frankenstein Newspaper Article: pg. 13
Frankenstein Essay: pg. 14
Prose Piece- “Lady of Shallot:” pg. 15
Literary Analysis: pg. 17
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Senior year has brought several new and interesting challenges. From
learning to balance school, work, and the business that accompanies the last
year of high school, I have discovered something which will be essential in
my future college life. Good writing takes focus. I have always thought of
myself as a good writer. I have historically always done well on essays and
compositions without much effort, and I did the same thing this year. Slowly
throughout the course of this year, however, I became very discontent with
my writing. I felt like the half job I had been doing was not sufficient and I
should hold myself to a much higher standard if I want to grow both as a
writer and as a person.
What follows this writer’s statement is not my best writing, however it
is what I wrote and should be judged as such. While these pieces are not
alone in mediocrity, the mediocrity will hopefully be isolated to my high
school career. There is something to be said of taking pride in your work. I
have taken great pride in work that I have done in the past, but this year I
failed to accomplish this. I feel like I let myself down this year, and I hope to
accomplish more in the future. Despite my shortcomings, I believe that my
writing has grown a great deal this year. While the growth may not be
evinced very clearly in the works that follow, I believe that I learned a great
deal this year about what my writing should not be. I tend to be wordy and
redundant. I waste too much time using generic adjectives and adverbs.
Additionally, my sentence structure is very repetitive and leads the reader to
get bored very easily.
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I hope to remedy these issues next year and in the years to come by
working on improving my writing through repetition. I intend on doing a
great deal of reading and writing this summer in the hope of reaching my
maximum potential in my literary capabilities. Only through this can I truly
achieve what I would like to achieve next year and for the rest of my life.
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Greetings my fellow voyagers! My name is Theodoric the Vain. I have
explored the far ends of the earth and discovered many lands. In other
nations they know me by many different names, but you can refer to me as
“Theo.” I am pleased to make your acquaintance as I am sure you are
thrilled to make mine. As the greatest explorer in history, I am naturally
sought after by kings and queens on all ends of the earth. Today, however,
you have the privilege of making an expedition with me. I assure you that
this is truly a once-in-a-lifetime experience. When you return to your humble
abodes, your wives and children will surely be flabbergasted at the fact that
a lowly peasant like yourself had the honor of being escorted by the greatest
discoverer this world (or any other world) has ever seen.
This is one of the few trips that I am taking voluntarily, as the majority
of my travel comes at the request of royalty. Actually, request is putting it
quite lightly. Typically, I have a king offering me his daughter’s hand in
marriage along with more wealth than you can even imagine. Naturally I
decline these requests, however, as I would find it degrading to take such
compensation for what I do. I travel for the glory, the honor, and the women.
I have a natural sense of bravery and courage that few women can resist.
Obviously, I have accumulated a great deal of glory, honor, and women over
the years, but one thing that I have never acquired was knowledge of Sir
Thomas Beckett.
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I have traveled far and wide and I have seen many nations and many
people, but one person has made an indelible mark on me. While traveling
through Europe, I encountered a lowly peasant like you. I was traveling quite
heavily at the time as I had not had time to store my equipment anywhere.
At the time I stored all of my maps in a leather-bound booklet with my name
inscribed on it. It just so happened that I dropped by booklet and did not
realize its disappearance until much later. Without my maps I would lose
everything I had as I would serve no purpose. This peasant retrieved the
booklet and searched far and wide to find me to return my maps, and when
he did I praised him for what felt like years. Honestly, this was the first time
I had ever thanked anyone for anything. At the time, he said, he was on his
way to Canterbury and I made it my goal to go there someday and I never
did. Today I shall meet that goal just as I have met every goal in my past.
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To most modern readers, Beowulf may appear to be barbaric, savage,
or at the very least arrogant. During the Anglo-Saxon period, however, he
was not only heroic, but noble and brave as well. Despite the sharp
contrasts between Anglo-Saxon culture and our own, several aspects of the
character of Beowulf can still be perceived as heroic today as long as it is
read in the correct mindset. The values of the Anglo-Saxon period such as
honor, the role of fate, the importance of family history, and loyalty are all
evinced throughout the epic of Beowulf.
Despite its age, the epic of Beowulf embodies an arrogant search for
honor that has resonated throughout all of time, including the present.
Beowulf does not seek wealth, fame, fortune, infamy, or anything between.
All Beowulf desires is glory. Glory can be solely accomplished through an
honorable and venerable battle. This is why he requests to battle Grendel
without the assistance of any of Hrothgar’s men (ll. 244-245). Additionally,
he acknowledges the fact that Grendel cannot battle with weaponry,
therefore he decides to fight the beast barehanded to level the proverbial
playing field (ll. 246-247). Additionally, however, he makes sure to boast the
honor and glory he has already achieved in his lifetime such as hunting sea
monsters and being a highly revered warrior (ll. 230-236).
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Another key aspect to the Anglo-Saxon culture was the role of fate.
Later replaced by a supposed higher deity, fate was the “god” of a pagan
time period. He not only attributes his successes to fate (l. 237), but he also
his failures (ll. 796-797). Fate is not only an intervening entity, but also a
personified, biased individual. The Anglo-Saxons believed that their entire
existence was based upon fate. If fate deemed them worthy to accomplish a
goal or win a battle, then fate has the final say above work, strength, and
ability.
Every official Beowulf met, he introduced himself not by a name or a
nationality, rather by his lineage. When he first meets the Danish guard at
the beach, he utilizes his family history to gain a level of both trust and
respect from the soldier (ll. 156-159). In the Anglo-Saxon period, one’s
lineage was thought to be a fortuitous representation of one’s capabilities,
aspirations, and accomplishments. Despite Beowulf’s innumerable
accomplishments, he mentions his father’s above his own. This pride is no
doubt the result of strong family histories. This does not end at his direct
lineage either. He also mentions his cousin (l. 221) to substantiate his
strength.
Loyalty, thought by many to be the most noble of all the Anglo-Saxon
characteristics, is fundamental to comprehend the premise of the epic.
Death is not an object to Beowulf as long as his nobility and loyalty remain
intact (ll. 265-267). Without fully comprehending the concept of true loyalty,
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the foundation of the entire story is inconceivable. No man in the modern
age would rather die than retreat in the heat of battle, in the epic of Beowulf,
however, this is a reality. Beowulf proves time and time again that he would
rather die in a blaze of glory than run from a battle (ll. 755-758). This hubris,
however, would inevitably be his downfall.
Without fully comprehending the context of the epic of Beowulf, no one
can easily comprehend the subtext. The Anglo-Saxon period was a rich time
that defined a very distinct part of our history. Several of their values have
died off, but a select few live on today in our everyday lives. Through his
honor, fate, lineage, and loyalty, Beowulf substantiated his claim as the
quintessential Anglo-Saxon. In the end, however, the only thing that
mattered was his inevitable grave.
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Today has been a glorious day. This morning I was walking to the
convenience store where I work and that’s when I saw it. I saw one beautiful
silver airplane strike the World Trade Center in lower Manhattan. The north
tower was the first one struck. I rejoiced when I saw this, not because I
wanted Americans dead, but rather because of what this represented to my
family and me. No longer did America stand tall and reign supreme as the
kings of the world. Today, someone took a blow at them and they could not
strike back, because of Allah’s will.
Oh sweet Allah! Do my eyes deceive me? As I am sitting here
writing this entry, another plane just hit the south tower. This is beautiful.
Allah is great! I feel sympathy for those who have died, but I feel so much
satisfaction knowing that today America was attacked. For years they have
supported the Jews and those who wish to persecute my people. Today the
persecutors have become the persecuted and I am very excited.
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I just walked over to Times Square where I learned that the Pentagon
was also hit. This is great. I find it hard to believe that the people who have
been bullying my friends and family are finally forced to suffer. It feels so
good to know that I am not alone in my frustration and now I do not have to
be alone in my redemption. Today, America was dealt a great blow at the
hands of the people they have tortured. This is the same America who
supported the Jews when they killed my brother last year. This is the same
America who supported the Jews that took my house. This is the same
America that has military occupying my homeland. They deserve to be
leveled, and finally someone has done it. Today has been great. Today
Israel is crushed and Allah’s will can be done! Today is the day that
Americans learn, once and for all, that the Persian gulf is not their home and
they should stay away from it. Allah be praised!
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Every day, thousands of children go to sleep in orphanages and foster
homes all across America. Adoption rates are growing, but despite this, over
251,000 children are still in foster care. We need to work together to find
these children good homes. The quagmire that the United States now finds
itself in is that these children have nowhere to go. They need to be raised by
someone who truly loves them and cares about them, and no one loves
these children more than pedophiles. We would like to make the most
modest proposal to you to help these children find homes and help fulfill the
lives of those pedophiles who have been disenfranchised and persecuted all
throughout this land. If you pass an act to legalize all sexual relationships
and help establish the Youth-Elder Love and Paternity Association (YELPA).
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We have an epidemic in America. Every day, hundreds of men
nationwide are arrested for sexual harassment, sexual preditation, and
statutory rape. The current laws in America do not allow for men over
eighteen to have a sexual relationship with anyone under sixteen. This is a
travesty. Not only does this infringe our constitutional rights, but it can
prevent these men from helping, mentoring, and teaching these young
children like father figures. Chris Hansen is a correspondent for Dateline
NBC. On his segment “To Catch a Predator,” he takes part in using methods
of entrapment along with Perverted Justice law enforcement to catch men
trying to meet young children online. John Frantz is one of the men he
caught. After being interrogated by Hansen, Frantz said that “...if she really
is who she says she is, my intention is to befriend her and try to mentor her.”
Frantz’s intentions were benign, yet he was taken into custody by law
enforcement due to these unnecessary laws.
By giving adults like Frantz the capability to host, mentor, and make
sweet love to young teenage girls, we can move the orphans stuck in foster
care back into a loving home. Studies show that sixty percent of children put
into foster care return to their birth parents. After experiencing the love,
care, and passion that people like Franz and others can provide for them,
these children will not have the desire to return to their birthparents who
often live in dangerous, lower-class settings and cannot provide as well for
the child. Additionally, many of these children may learn what it’s like to
have brothers and sisters, as several men who are interested in younger
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children often have children of their own. Frantz is only one example of this,
as he has two sons.
Additionally, YELPA will save the taxpayers’ money. The United States
spends millions of dollars every year on foster care for young children who
have nowhere else to go. If we could provide good and loving homes for
these children, then we could save this money and spend it in other areas
such as our educational system or healthcare. The National Debt has grown
to over 10.6 trillion dollars and our government has made no serious effort to
combat it. The Obama administration has been in office for almost two
whole days and, as of now, it appears that its calls for change are derelict.
Obama promised to cut the budget, and now forty-eight hours later, they are
still yet to make one single cutback. Where better to start making cuts than
in the shoddy foster care system that has put hundreds of children on the
streets and in harm’s way?
In foster care, the children’s morale is low. Many feel unwanted and
unloved by their foster parents, and almost sixty percent of those children
return to their birth parents who do not love them. This needs to be
stopped. By utilizing pedophiles who truly love these children and crave to
mentor them, so much so that they are willing to be arrested for it, we can
easily boost child morale and let these children know that they are loved by
someone. This love is genuine and pure, and b letting these men express it,
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we can take a bite out of child poverty and make this world a much better
place.
ARTICLE
Throughout Frankenstein, Mary Shelly depicts two very different
characters inhabiting Victor’s creation. Early on, the creature is peaceful and
benevolent, but later is turned cynical by the hateful actions of others. This
leads to terror and destruction. One must ask, however, what led others to
treat him so horribly. His appearance was grotesque, but no more so than
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that of a very ugly human. Additionally, ugliness is no reason to shoot
someone nor chase them out of town. The creature was persecuted not for
his appearance, but rather out of fear and awe of his power. Because of this,
his story is one of a tragic hero.
From the beginning, we are told that the creature is a work of
goodness. Dr. Frankenstein believed that his actions would “pour a torrent
of light into our dark world” (32). To him, the creature is not a monster upon
its birth, but rather a work of art. On page 35 he calls the creature
“Beautiful… his hair was of a lustrous black and flowing; his teeth of pearly
whiteness.” Soon after, however, he rejects his creation calling it a
“demonical corpse” and saying that “no mortal could support the horror of
that countenance” (36). It is this kind of dejection that leads the creature to
become hateful towards mankind.
Consequently, the dejection that he is treated with leads him to do
unthinkable things. His murders, however, are no more unthinkable than the
murders committed by such tragic heroes as Beowulf of Macbeth.
Conversely, the creature’s murders are more easily justifiable due to his
great suffering. His creator hates him and refuses to create a woman
companion for him, saying “Shall I create another like yourself whose joint
wickedness might desolate the world?” (104) When even his creator finds it
impossible to love him, difficulty will arise with his ability to love himself, so
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much so that on page 104 he declares “If I cannot inspire love, I will cause
fear.” Therefore, his tragic flaw is the inability to inspire love.
By the end of the novel, he has murdered and tortured several
innocent people. He later acknowledges his faults saying that “crime has
degraded me beneath the meanest animal” (165). His inability to inspire
love caused him to hate his creator and the entirety of the human race,
which did not love him. Later, when he is not granted a mate, he knows he
will never be loved and instead seeks to inspire hate. Finally, his inability to
inspire love leads him to hate himself enough to “seek the most northern
extremity of the globe; I shall collect my funeral pile, and consume to ashes
this miserable frame” (166). His dejection led to his rise, his fall, and
eventually his death. This creature made out of love never received an
ounce in return.
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There was once a river and a road, leading to the town of Camelot,
which passed through long fields of grain. The Island of Shalott, which
contains such plants as lilies, aspens, and willows, lies further down the river.
On the island there is a woman imprisoned by four gray walls and four gray
towers. There are several boats that bass this island, but only the reapers
who harvest the barley hear her singing.
The lady of Shalott weaves a colorful web. She has been told that if
she looks at Camelot, she will be cursed, but she has no idea what this curse
may be. Consequently, she concentrates on her weaving and never lifts her
eyes. As she weaves, there is a mirror hanging before her, in which she sees
the shadows of the world. She sees such things as a highway road,
peasants, damsels, an abbot, a young shepherd, knights, and a page dressed
in red.
A knight in brass armor rides through the fields and the sun shines on
his armor and his armor makes ringing noises as he gallops. His forehead
glows in the sunlight and he has black curly hair flowing out from under his
helmet. His image shows on the lady of Shalott’s mirror and he sings our
“tirra lirra.” The lady then abandons her loom and announces that the curse
is upon her.
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It begins to storm as the Lady of Shalott descends from her tower to
find a boat. She writes her title around the boat’s bow and looks
downstream to Camelot. That night, she lies down in the boat and the
current takes her to Camelot. She is wearing a white robe and she sings her
last song as she sails to Camelot. She sings until her blood freezes and her
eyes darken. When her boat arrives at Camelot, all the knights, lords, and
ladies of Camelot come to see her. They all read that her boat says “The
Lady of Shalott” on it, and they are afraid. Knight Lancelot pushes aside the
crowd, looks at the lady, and says that she has a lovely face and that God
will have mercy on her.
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Writing symbolically has always been one of Charles Dickens’ strongest
suits. Nearly all of his pieces have an innumerable amount of symbols to
help convey his message more fully to the reader, and Hard Times is no
exception. Subtly within the novel, Dickens sprinkled in several Christian
symbols that correspond with the message he attempts to convey.
Additionally, Dickens uses several symbols to emphasize the importance of
the greater educational system espousing the arts and creativity as
legitimate forms of intelligence with equal, if not greater, significance than
the memorization and regurgitation of facts and figures.
As well as Dickens used symbolism to communicate his message, his
brilliance is evinced most clearly throughout the course of the second
chapter. Using characters especially as symbols, Dickens conveys a very
strong sense of discontent with the educational system of his day.
Employing symbolic character names was an especially prominent feature
within this chapter. Naming his characters things such as “Thomas
Gradgrind” and “Sissie Jupe” are clear signs of satire and convey certain
levels of the character. Obviously, he uses the last name of the teacher,
Gradgrind, to pass off abrasive character traits and the name of Sissy Jupe to
try to show a level of ditziness which would be frowned upon in an
educational facility. However, through closer analysis of these names, the
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true character of said characters is manifested. While Thomas Gradgrind’s
last name shows one dimension of the character Dickens attempts to
establish, his first name also has great significance. Biblically, Saint Thomas
is notorious for doubting the validity of the claims that Jesus rose from the
dead. As Bruce Wallis said, Thomas Gradgrind is “guilty of nothing so much
as spiritual blindness-like the original doubting Thomas, he must weigh and
measure and touch before he can attain to belief.” [sic] Similarly, in
analyzing Sissy Jupe, the realization that her full name is Cecilia is
imperative. As most Christian scholars would know, Saint Cecilia is the
patron saint of music, “an art form loosely known to evoke an intuitive and
emotional, rather than objective and rational responses” [sic] (Wallis).
Embodied in the occupation of Thomas Gradgrind in addition to the
setting of the novel is a great deal of symbolism. Described by Robin
Jackson as “a dealer of hardware and a proprietor of a utilitarian school,”
Gradgrind is very obviously dealing with two very similar professions.
Representing a very industrial state of education, “hardware” is thought of in
many educational circles as the tools necessary to achieve a higher
education, as opposed to software which is the actual “programming” of the
mind to think intelligently. Utilizing this “hardware” approach towards
education like Gradgrind does shows the truest flaws of the industrial
revolution. Consequently, the unilateral teaching methods of Gradgrind put
in this context represent the flaws of a much larger institution than England’s
educational system. Rather, Dickens is taking a blow here at the industrial
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revolution at large and the detrimental impact it had on not only the arts, but
the general creativity of student populace as a whole.
Additionally, there is a great deal of symbolism behind the
conversation Sissy Jupe and Thomas Gradgrind have regarding the flowers
on the carpet. Smiling pretentiously, Gradgrind takes another opportunity
here to embarrass young Sissy by questioning the class as to whether or not
it would be practical to have carpet with floral designs. While the majority of
the class responds with a decisive “no” when presented the question, Sissy
says that she would like her carpet to have pictures of flowers on it for the
aesthetic qualities. Subsequently, Gradgrind persists to mock the concept by
asking Sissy, “And is that why you would put tables and chairs upon them,
and have people walking over them with heavy boots?” Consequently,
Dickens creates the image of flowers being trampled on by less beautiful,
more practical things, representing the stifling of Sissy Jupe’s creativity.
Albeit harsh, Dickens’ portrayal of the educational system and society
as a whole in Hard Times is not only accurately portrayed, but also very
vividly portrayed. Shortly after beginning the novel, several symbols
become very obvious. Using both Christian symbols through character
names and images created through dialog creates a very real sense of
concern for British society. Raising several concerns, including fear of
industrialization, Dickens did a phenomenal job of scaring the reader into
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submission. Several symbols, both obvious and subtle, are what made this
piece a classic and Dickens a legend.