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Page 1: Thesis Statements!. What is a Thesis Statement? A statement that expresses your position on your topic in one sentence. A statement that expresses your

Thesis Statements!Thesis Statements!

Page 2: Thesis Statements!. What is a Thesis Statement? A statement that expresses your position on your topic in one sentence. A statement that expresses your

What is a Thesis Statement?What is a Thesis Statement?

1.1. A statement that expresses your A statement that expresses your position on your topic in one position on your topic in one sentence.sentence.

2.2. It is focused on just one topic.It is focused on just one topic.

It is NOT:It is NOT:

1.1. Just a topicJust a topic

2.2. A QuestionA Question

Page 3: Thesis Statements!. What is a Thesis Statement? A statement that expresses your position on your topic in one sentence. A statement that expresses your

Where do I find a thesis Where do I find a thesis statement?statement?

Thesis statements are the Thesis statements are the last last sentence of an introductory sentence of an introductory paragraphparagraph of an essay. of an essay.

Last sentence of your first paragraph!Last sentence of your first paragraph!

Page 4: Thesis Statements!. What is a Thesis Statement? A statement that expresses your position on your topic in one sentence. A statement that expresses your

What does a Good Thesis What does a Good Thesis Statement Look Like?Statement Look Like?

Good Thesis Statement:Good Thesis Statement:

““Henry Ford was an important inventor Henry Ford was an important inventor because of his technological because of his technological contributions to our country.”contributions to our country.”

Needs Work:Needs Work:

““Henry Ford was an important man.”Henry Ford was an important man.”

Page 5: Thesis Statements!. What is a Thesis Statement? A statement that expresses your position on your topic in one sentence. A statement that expresses your

What does a Good Thesis What does a Good Thesis Statement Look Like?Statement Look Like?

Good Thesis Statement:Good Thesis Statement:““The Battle of Gettysburg was a The Battle of Gettysburg was a

turning point in the Civil War.”turning point in the Civil War.”

Needs Work:Needs Work:““The Battle of Gettysburg was an The Battle of Gettysburg was an

important battle.”important battle.”““A lot of men died at the Battle of A lot of men died at the Battle of

Gettysburg.”Gettysburg.”

Page 6: Thesis Statements!. What is a Thesis Statement? A statement that expresses your position on your topic in one sentence. A statement that expresses your

Find the Thesis StatementFind the Thesis Statement

It doesn’t matter what kind they are, despite how It doesn’t matter what kind they are, despite how much joy they bring, so many of them are looked down much joy they bring, so many of them are looked down upon. A great many of people have strict beliefs that upon. A great many of people have strict beliefs that video games will only corrupt their children and are video games will only corrupt their children and are nothing but trouble. This kind of line of thinking isn’t nothing but trouble. This kind of line of thinking isn’t really so unbelievable and sounds very rational. The really so unbelievable and sounds very rational. The common conversation about the subject of the video common conversation about the subject of the video game would most likely be opposing the idea or about game would most likely be opposing the idea or about the most popular one, Call of Duty. Research has also the most popular one, Call of Duty. Research has also shown that video games may actually improve, if not shown that video games may actually improve, if not teach, important skills that are necessary for life. The teach, important skills that are necessary for life. The skills shown to be learned through video games are skills shown to be learned through video games are related to mental, career building and other multipurpose related to mental, career building and other multipurpose skills. Video games improve an individuals’ health, skills skills. Video games improve an individuals’ health, skills and the economy.and the economy.

Page 7: Thesis Statements!. What is a Thesis Statement? A statement that expresses your position on your topic in one sentence. A statement that expresses your

Find the Thesis StatementFind the Thesis Statement

It doesn’t matter what kind they are, despite how It doesn’t matter what kind they are, despite how much joy they bring, so many of them are looked down much joy they bring, so many of them are looked down upon. A great many of people have strict beliefs that upon. A great many of people have strict beliefs that video games will only corrupt their children and are video games will only corrupt their children and are nothing but trouble. This kind of line of thinking isn’t nothing but trouble. This kind of line of thinking isn’t really so unbelievable and sounds very rational. The really so unbelievable and sounds very rational. The common conversation about the subject of the video common conversation about the subject of the video game would most likely be opposing the idea or about game would most likely be opposing the idea or about the most popular one, Call of Duty. Research has also the most popular one, Call of Duty. Research has also shown that video games may actually improve, if not shown that video games may actually improve, if not teach, important skills that are necessary for life. The teach, important skills that are necessary for life. The skills shown to be learned through video games are skills shown to be learned through video games are related to mental, career building and other multipurpose related to mental, career building and other multipurpose skills. skills. Video games improve an individuals’ health, skills Video games improve an individuals’ health, skills and the economy.and the economy.

Page 8: Thesis Statements!. What is a Thesis Statement? A statement that expresses your position on your topic in one sentence. A statement that expresses your

Find the Thesis StatementFind the Thesis Statement

Going through the 1800’s, fashion was very Going through the 1800’s, fashion was very important to women. The look that women choose was important to women. The look that women choose was very proper and unique; something different from today. very proper and unique; something different from today. “French fashion was dominated by a new wave of “French fashion was dominated by a new wave of Anglomania” (Thomas Pauline). Anglomania is an Anglomania” (Thomas Pauline). Anglomania is an intense admiration of, interest in, or tendency to imitate intense admiration of, interest in, or tendency to imitate English institutions, manners, and customs. Because of English institutions, manners, and customs. Because of this women looked up to royalty fashion, and the change this women looked up to royalty fashion, and the change of it throughout the 1800’s. There was lots of detailing of it throughout the 1800’s. There was lots of detailing and extravagant accessories in the fashion that we don’t and extravagant accessories in the fashion that we don’t have today. Fashion trends in the 1800’s have a have today. Fashion trends in the 1800’s have a historical difference from fashion today. historical difference from fashion today.

Page 9: Thesis Statements!. What is a Thesis Statement? A statement that expresses your position on your topic in one sentence. A statement that expresses your

Find the Thesis StatementFind the Thesis Statement

Going through the 1800’s, fashion was very Going through the 1800’s, fashion was very important to women. The look that women choose was important to women. The look that women choose was very proper and unique; something different from today. very proper and unique; something different from today. “French fashion was dominated by a new wave of “French fashion was dominated by a new wave of Anglomania” (Thomas Pauline). Anglomania is an Anglomania” (Thomas Pauline). Anglomania is an intense admiration of, interest in, or tendency to imitate intense admiration of, interest in, or tendency to imitate English institutions, manners, and customs. Because of English institutions, manners, and customs. Because of this women looked up to royalty fashion, and the change this women looked up to royalty fashion, and the change of it throughout the 1800’s. There was lots of detailing of it throughout the 1800’s. There was lots of detailing and extravagant accessories in the fashion that we don’t and extravagant accessories in the fashion that we don’t have today. have today. Fashion trends in the 1800’s have a Fashion trends in the 1800’s have a historical difference from fashion today.historical difference from fashion today.

Page 10: Thesis Statements!. What is a Thesis Statement? A statement that expresses your position on your topic in one sentence. A statement that expresses your

Good or Needs Work?Good or Needs Work?

Everyone or almost everyone knows about the Everyone or almost everyone knows about the D-Day, also known as Operation Overlord, the D-Day, also known as Operation Overlord, the largest invasion world history. But little is known largest invasion world history. But little is known about what was going on behind the scene about what was going on behind the scene before and during D-Day. Things like the pre-D-before and during D-Day. Things like the pre-D-Day assaults, the other part to Operation Day assaults, the other part to Operation Overlord, the lives lost, or why we had to get Overlord, the lives lost, or why we had to get involved in another world war. involved in another world war. But the things that But the things that people know little about are what made people know little about are what made Operation Overlord the most success full Operation Overlord the most success full operation in military history. operation in military history.

Page 11: Thesis Statements!. What is a Thesis Statement? A statement that expresses your position on your topic in one sentence. A statement that expresses your

Good or Needs Work?Good or Needs Work?

Inside this guide, any recruit with the desire to get into Inside this guide, any recruit with the desire to get into the military will be informed about different parts and the military will be informed about different parts and sections of the process of joining the military. What every sections of the process of joining the military. What every new solider should know is that before you can join the new solider should know is that before you can join the military, the recruit should go to every recruiter and find military, the recruit should go to every recruiter and find out what branch of the military they want to be in. Then out what branch of the military they want to be in. Then the recruiter looks at your past history to find out if the the recruiter looks at your past history to find out if the new recruit has any felonies. After he has looked at the new recruit has any felonies. After he has looked at the enlistee’s past, the recruiter wants to know what your enlistee’s past, the recruiter wants to know what your education level is. education level is. The requirements to enter the military The requirements to enter the military are having a clean background history, a good are having a clean background history, a good knowledge of high school courses, and being physically knowledge of high school courses, and being physically fit. fit.

Page 12: Thesis Statements!. What is a Thesis Statement? A statement that expresses your position on your topic in one sentence. A statement that expresses your

Good or Needs Work?Good or Needs Work?

Have you ever wondered how sport shoes have Have you ever wondered how sport shoes have evolved over the years? There are many types evolved over the years? There are many types of athletic shoes and they have been around for of athletic shoes and they have been around for a long time. Athletic shoes have a variety of a long time. Athletic shoes have a variety of features that have changed since the first features that have changed since the first athletic shoes where made in 1970. athletic shoes where made in 1970. The main The main topics of this paper are the inventing of the topics of this paper are the inventing of the original athletic shoe, the new technology we original athletic shoe, the new technology we have made to improve over the athletic shoe and have made to improve over the athletic shoe and the Minimalist (barefoot like shoe).the Minimalist (barefoot like shoe).

Page 13: Thesis Statements!. What is a Thesis Statement? A statement that expresses your position on your topic in one sentence. A statement that expresses your

Your AssignmentYour Assignment

1.1. Read your sourcesRead your sources

2.2. Fill out your green sheet:Fill out your green sheet:1.1. Write your thesis statementWrite your thesis statement

2.2. Determine your Power 2 ideas. You Determine your Power 2 ideas. You need 4 of them.need 4 of them.

Due at the end of the hour!Due at the end of the hour!