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    Gonzalez 1

    Emanuel wants to make Chicago more immigrant friendly

    The idea of Sanctuary City is very complex because many people seem

    to have strong opinions about it. While some believe it is okay, others believe

    that undocumented immigrants should be deported because they are causing

    harm to our society. For instance, Bill O Reilly harshly criticizes the American

    government for not protecting its citizens by having such lenient immigration

    laws (OReilly 1). He emphasizes and exaggerates a situation in which five

    immigrants raped an innocent mother on the streets of New York (OReilly 1).

    Though this seems to suggest that such harsh opinions about immigration laws

    based on this situation would be a logical fallacy however, many do hold that

    belief and may even be convinced by the article. On the other hand, Harvard

    sociologist Robert J. Sampson, he brings upon a different opinion about

    immigrants and claims that there has been a correlation between immigrants and

    the amount of crime in a city. He ultimately suggests that in certain

    neighborhoods where immigrant populations have increased, homicide rates

    have decreased (Sampson 1). Ultimately, Sampson brings upon a very positive

    view of undocumented immigrants. Similarly, Kristen Mack, Chicago Tribune

    reporter, as puts the idea of Sanctuary City in a positive light as she states that

    Emanuels new law will take away the right for police officers to report

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    immigrants to the ICE unless they have conducted or been accused of extreme

    crimes (Mack 1). While others have argued that undocumented immigrants have

    done nothing but negatively affect our country, nonetheless, more measures

    should be taken to lessen the ways in which they can be deported because the

    majority are solely trying to make a better life and find opportunities to support

    their family.

    For some time, undocumented immigrants have held a negative

    reputation. For instance, many suggest that undocumented immigrants are

    taking the jobs of American citizens. Although it might be true that

    undocumented immigrants will work for a lower pay, the fact that they are

    actually taking the jobs of citizens is untrue. Because the majority of

    undocumented immigrants come to the United States for a better life, they work

    extremely hard. Often times, undocumented immigrants earn their jobs and they

    do not take them away. Also, several undocumented immigrants would take

    jobs that others would not. For instance, many immigrants work tough and long

    hours in factories, do yard work, are janitors and so on. In many instances, the

    statement that undocumented immigrants take the jobs of American citizens is

    often untrue. Undocumented immigrants often times have jobs that many do not

    want.

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    Furthermore, most recently, there as been a stereotype that the majority of

    all undocumented immigrants are criminals and are only in the United States to

    cause harm; however, that is largely untrue. The majority of undocumented

    immigrants risk their lives, their families lives and give up their lives in their

    home country. Many undocumented immigrants are hard workers. For instance,

    they settle for extremely difficult jobs, less pay and not the best conditions in

    the workplace to have a job to maintain themselves and their families. Also,

    undocumented immigrants have to work harder in order to maintain great

    grades. Because they do come to the United States for better opportunities, their

    dreams are to go to college and often times, money is tight and therefore they

    must work hard in school to get scholarship money so they can afford to go

    college.

    Overall, Rahm Emanuels ordnance to only deport undocumented

    immigrants that have outstanding crime has created bigger and brighter dreams

    for undocumented immigrants. In the city of Chicago, many can live their lives

    without worry of being reported if they do what they are supposed to be doing.