The Missing Bracelet

The Missing Bracelet

Do you want to center this title? If so, just delete the big square and move the little one.1

Selena shows us her bracelet.

Bob comes and takes Selenas bracelet.

You have an extra space after came. I think came should be comes, took should be takes (keeping all the verbs in the present tense.)3Oh No. Bob hides Selenas bracelet.

There is an extra space before Oh and the . should be inside the quotes.4

Nicki says Lets look under the slide. Its not there.

You need to end your quote with quotation marks after slide.5

Sophie says, Lets look in the sand. Its not there.

Said should be says, and the red line is indicating that you need two spaces after the quote ends.6Sophia says, Lets look under that tree. Yay! We found the bracelet.

Said should be says and y need a quotation mark after tree. The other quotation marks dont need to be there because those words are not being said by anyone.7Bob is mad. Selena says, Thank you, to Sophia.

Two spaces after the . Was should be is, Said should be says and should have a comma after it. There should also be a comma after you and no capital on You.8