students ： class 3 ， senior 1 teacher ： cheng jinhua school ： fengcheng senior high school...
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Students ： Class 3 ， Senior 1Teacher ： Cheng JinhuaSchool ： Fengcheng Senior High
SchoolTime ： May 27th ， 2014
• keep the order• guarantee/make sure of our safety• protect us from being disturbed / affected / harmed…• …
• used as a bedroom for sleep• shared with other people
dormdorm
dorm life
Dear Miss Cheng ， I’m sorry that I did poorly in the mid-term examination. That’s because I often couldn’t focus my attention in class and missed many key points of knowledge. I often felt sleepy and even fell asleep in class, because I didn’t get enough sleep at nightenough sleep at night ． And I have to complain about the noise in my dorm during the time for sleep. The dorm supervisor did warn us not to break the sleeping rules but it didn’t work. My roommates often kept chatting, playing with their mobile phones and doing something else secretly till midnight. My roommates all couldn’t sleep soundly, and as a result, we are falling behind in study, which really upsets us as well as our parents. Please help us out of the problems with your advice! Thanks! Best regards! Yours, Tom
Dear Tom， I’m sorry for your experience in the dorm. But luckily, my students and I will provide you with some very useful tips for a better dorm life.
Good luck to you all with your dorm life! Sincerely yours, Miss Cheng
stick to the sleeping schedule; chatting and doing something else; enough sleep; sleeping on time ; obeying the rules and regulations;
The only road to making sure of _____________ is to _____________________________.
Try your best to persuade your roommates to avoid ______________________________.You
can never put too much emphasis on the importance of _______________________________
in the dorm, which can guarantee the safety and order of the dorm for all students. Once you
realize that, it is easy for you all to form the habit of _________________.
stick to the sleeping scheduleenough sleep
chatting and doing something else
obeying the rules and regulations
sleeping on time
CHECKLIST
Are the tips
□trying to solve the given problem?
□reasonable, practical and helpful enough?
□expressed in various ways of language?
to make your writing better
By giving reasons, purposes, results and effects.
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Dear Tom， I’m sorry for your experience in the dorm. But luckily, my students and I will provide you with some very useful tips for a better dorm life.
Good luck to you all with your dorm life! Sincerely yours, Miss Cheng
The only road to making sure of _____________ is to _____________________________.
Try your best to persuade your roommates to avoid ______________________________.You
can never put too much emphasis on the importance of _______________________________
in the dorm, which can guarantee the safety and order of the dorm for all students. Once you
realize that, it is easy for you all to form the habit of _________________.
stick to the sleeping scheduleenough sleep
chatting and doing something else
obeying the rules and regulations
sleeping on time
CHECKLIST
Are the tips
□trying to solve the given problem?
□reasonable, practical and helpful enough?
□expressed in various ways of language?
to make your writing better
By giving reasons, purposes, results and effects.
How ？
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√
√
to make your writing better
Do sth/ Don’t do…
If/When…, do …
祈使句Imperative Sentences
should/may/can/must
have to / had better /might as well
情态动词Model Verbs
I suggest/ advise
My suggestion/ advice is
It’s important/necessary
+ that … (should) do …
名词性从句Noun Clauses
I suggest sb / sb’s doing … / I advise sb to do …The road/solution to … is to do …It’s better to do…
动词不定式或动名词Infinitives and Gerunds
lay/put emphasis on… / pay attention to…
can never put too much emphasis on the importance of
…
其他短语和句型Other Phrases and Sentence Patterns
Wow! What a mess here ， Sam! It must be terrible for your to live in such a untidy and dirty dorm ！
It’s terrible. But we don’t know how to clean up.Will you give some tips ？
•It is __________________ that is your home from Monday to Friday, as long as you fill it with understanding, care and love.
• It is _________________ who are your family from Monday to Friday, as long as you share with each other joy and sorrow.
the dorm
the roommates
qualitiescharacters
attitudes
behaviorshabits
What if someone is ill or sad ？What if someone is lazy and selfish ？What if someone has difficulty in learning ?…
你被邀请在下周的学生会上发表一个简短的演讲。 题目为 Tips for a Better Dorm Life 。 请根据所讨论的内容，试着编写你的演讲稿。可选择其中的 1-2 个问题，给出你的建议。
Good afternoon, my schoolmates! I feel it a great honor to make a short speech here. The topic of my speech is Tips for a Better Dorm Life. Living in a dorm, you may have problems with ________________________, but don’t worry, for my tips will help you out.
As long as you make efforts to change for the better, the tips will work and you are sure to benefit a lot from your dorm life. That’s all. Thanks for your listening / your time.
1. Improve your speech draft by trying to solve 3 or more
problems which your schoolmates may have with the dorm life.
2. Comment on your writing according to the CHECKLIST before
you hand it in tomorrow.
* You may write your own beginning and ending paragraphs instead of the
given ones.
1. Improve your speech draft by trying to solve 3 or more
problems which your schoolmates may have with the dorm life.
2. Comment on your writing according to the CHECKLIST before
you hand it in tomorrow.
* You may write your own beginning and ending paragraphs instead of the
given ones.