problem statement 11 original input - use of elements of originality
TRANSCRIPT
ORIGINAL INPUTSUMMARY POINT OF ACTION THESIS STATEMENT
RESEARCH QUESTION SYNTHESIS INCREASED VALUES UNEXPECTED CONNECTIONS VIABILITY
VERSATILITY NEW USES
STATEMENT OF THE RESEARCH PROBLEM – STEP # 11
Image courtesy of Mark Woodcock at www.bigfootdigital.co.uk
IF MY PROBLEM STATEMENT HAS MORE OF
THESE, THEN IT IS MORE ORIGINAL... YES?
summary
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
The one-sentence statement of the research problem can express your original input in seven ways:1. Action Point – The proposal uses a new point of action in an old idea2. Synthesis – The proposal combines parts of old ideas into a new idea3. Increased Values – The proposal modifies an old idea so that it is more efficient,
achieves better effects or results in less time, or uses less resources or effort4. Unexpected Connections – The proposal clearly connects seemingly unconnected
ideas to increase values, viability, versatility or new uses• Viability – an idea can be completed before a deadline to achieve a specific goal• Versatility – an idea to meet a need or solve a problem can be used in many other
contexts• New uses – an idea is given new or additional uses
WAYS TO ACHIEVE ORIGINALITY
OBVIOUS ORIGINALITY: Output description may be enough to indicate originality
NOT OBVIOUS ORIGINALITY: Original elements may need to be explicitly stated
Action point Compared to usual proposal on this topic, this proposal focuses on....
Synthesis • Christmas, Hanukah, and Deepavali, and Ramadan greeting cards combined into one
Increased values Compared to its original version, results of this idea are better, faster, more effective, or use less resources
Unexpected connections
• Pens as spoons and forks• Discarded vegetable and fruit peel as
nutritious baby food
This idea is used for the first time in a particular place, language, purpose, or context
Viability [Under increased values]
Compared to its original version, this idea is easier or faster to complete
Versatility [Under increased values]
Compared to its original version, this idea can be used in many other ways such as...
New uses [Under increased values]
• Toilet paper that can be used as bandage, diaper, disinfectant
• Book that can be used as wallet, weapon, shopping list, and calculator
to state or not to state
High level of originality: An idea with more than one of these seven characteristics
point of action: why
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
The current need or problem situation is not the only point of action where one can propose a solution. Other points of action are:• Past – What started the problem or need?• Present – What are the direct effects of this problem or need at
present? What are the indirect effects?• Future – What effects or repercussions can be a result of this
need or problem situation?Thus, an old topic can become an original topic by shifting the
proposal to a past, present, or future point.
Point of Action: SUMMARYA need or problem situation
includes three points of action: past, present, and future.
You choose one point where your proposed action can meet the need or solve the problem.
CHOOSE AN ACTION POINT
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Point of Action: USEFULNESS 1
This is particularly important when your topic is rejected because it has been done before.
Your topic can be approved if it uses a point of action that has not been done before.
CHOOSE AN ACTION POINT
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Point of Action: USEFULNESS 2
This is useful when a topic is rejected because the topic shows no target beneficiary.
The topic can be approved if it uses a point of action that has not been done before, provided a target beneficiary can be included.
CHOOSE AN ACTION POINT
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
5 points of action
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
1. Trigger Elements – The proposed idea focuses on elements that can start an urgent need or problem situation
2. Contributing Variables - The proposed idea focuses on elements that can complicate an urgent need or problem situation
3. Urgent Need - The proposed idea focuses on an urgent need or problem situation at present
4. Current Effects – The proposed idea focuses on the existing effects of an urgent need or problem situation
5. Later Effects – The proposed idea focuses on future or possible effects of an urgent need or problem situation
Point of Action: PROBLEM SITUATION
A problem situation can include five points.
1 2 3 4 5
WHAT STARTED
THE PROBLEM
WHAT DEVELOPED
THE PROBLEM
WHAT IS THE PROBLEM AT
PRESENT
WHAT CAN HAPPEN
NEXT
WHAT CAN HAPPEN LATER
CHOOSE AN ACTION POINT
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Point of Action: URGENT NEED
Likewise, a target need can include five points.
1 2 3 4 5
WHAT STARTED
THE NEED?
WHAT INCREASED THE NEED?
WHAT IS THE NEED AT
PRESENT?
WHAT CAN HAPPEN
NEXT
WHAT CAN HAPPEN LATER
CHOOSE AN ACTION POINT
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Points of Action: NAMES
In research language, these five points are called
TRIGGER CONTRIBUTING ELEMENTS
URGENT NEED or
PROBLEM SITUATION
PRESENT EFFECT(S)
LATER EFFECT(S)
WHAT STARTED IT
WHAT DEVELOPED OR INCREASED IT
DESCRIBE IT AS IT IS AT PRESENT
WHAT CAN HAPPEN
NEXT
WHAT CAN HAPPEN LATER
CHOOSE AN ACTION POINT
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Explanation: TRIGGER ELEMENTSTRIGGER
ELEMENTSCONTRIBUTING VARIABLES (or
ELEMENTS )
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
CURRENT EFFECT(S)
LATER EFFECT(S)
The trigger elements start the situation, but require contributing variables to create the problem or need.
CHOOSE AN ACTION POINT
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Explanation: CONTRIBUTING VARIABLESTRIGGER
ELEMENTSCONTRIBUTING VARIABLES (or
ELEMENTS )
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
CURRENT EFFECT(S)
LATER EFFECT(S)
The trigger elements start the situation, but require contributing variables to create the problem or need.
These elements add to the triggers to create the problem situation
CHOOSE AN ACTION POINT
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Explanation: URGENT NEEDTRIGGER
ELEMENTSCONTRIBUTING VARIABLES (or
ELEMENTS )
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
CURRENT EFFECT(S) LATER EFFECT(S)
The trigger elements start the situation, but require contributing variables to create the problem or need.
These elements add to the triggers to create the problem situation
This is the urgent need or problem situation at present
CHOOSE AN ACTION POINT
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Explanation: CURRENT EFFECTSTRIGGER
ELEMENTSCONTRIBUTING VARIABLES (or
ELEMENTS )
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
CURRENT EFFECT(S) LATER EFFECT(S)
The trigger elements start the situation, but require contributing variables to create the problem or need.
These elements add to the triggers to create the problem situation
This is the urgent need or problem situation at present
These are the observable effects of the problem situation at the time of your proposal.
CHOOSE AN ACTION POINT
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Explanation: LATER EFFECTSTRIGGER
ELEMENTSCONTRIBUTING VARIABLES (or
ELEMENTS )
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
CURRENT EFFECT(S) LATER EFFECT(S)
The trigger elements start the situation, but require contributing variables to create the problem or need.
These elements add to the triggers to create the problem situation
This is the urgent need or problem situation at present
These are the observable effects of the problem situation or need at the time of your proposal.
These are the projected or predicted effects of the need or problem situation if no action is taken.
CHOOSE AN ACTION POINT
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
identify points of action
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
The points of action should be identified because:• Clarification – Each possibility is described and clarified• Choices – The clarification can result in a list of choices for a
research proposal• Options – In cases where a proposal is rejected, the writer can
submit a different proposal but still stay on the same topic
EXAMPLE 1IDENTIFY POINTS OF ACTION
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
1: State the Preliminary TopicTRIGGER
ELEMENTSCONTRIBUTING VARIABLES (or
ELEMENTS )
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
CURRENT EFFECT(S)
LATER EFFECT(S)
1. Pregnant college student2. Global warming3. Burning dormitory
A
EXAMPLE 1
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
2: State the 1st Point of ActionTRIGGER
ELEMENTSCONTRIBUTING VARIABLES (or
ELEMENTS )
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
CURRENT EFFECT(S)
LATER EFFECT(S)
• Life away from family• Culture
shock
1. Pregnant college student
2. Global warming3. Burning dormitory
A1
EXAMPLE 1
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
3: State the 2nd Point of ActionTRIGGER
ELEMENTSCONTRIBUTING
VARIABLES (or ELEMENTS )
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
CURRENT EFFECT(S)
LATER EFFECT(S)
• Life away from family• Culture
shock
• Loneliness• Lack of
information• Lack of values
education
1. Pregnant college student
A1 2
EXAMPLE 1
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
4: State the 3rd Point of ActionTRIGGER
ELEMENTSCONTRIBUTING VARIABLES (or
ELEMENTS )
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
CURRENT EFFECT(S)
LATER EFFECT(S)
• Life away from family
• Culture shock
• Loneliness• Lack of
information• Lack of values
education
1. Pregnant college student
•Low grades•Loss of scholarship•Forced marriage•Abortion
AB C D E
EXAMPLE 1
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
5: State the 4th Point of ActionTRIGGER
ELEMENTSCONTRIBUTING VARIABLES (or
ELEMENTS )
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
CURRENT EFFECT(S) LATER EFFECT(S)
• Life away from family
• Culture shock
• Loneliness• Lack of
information• Lack of values
education
1. Pregnant college student
• Low grades• Loss of
scholarship• Forced
marriage• Abortion
•Single motherhood•Ostracism by family or culture•Poor career prospects
AB C D E
EXAMPLE 1
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
EXAMPLE 2IDENTIFY POINTS OF ACTION
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
1: State the Preliminary TopicTRIGGER
ELEMENTSCONTRIBUTING VARIABLES (or
ELEMENTS )
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
CURRENT EFFECT(S)
LATER EFFECT(S)
2. Global warming3. Burning dormitory
A
EXAMPLE 2
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
2: State the 1st Point of ActionTRIGGER
ELEMENTSCONTRIBUTING VARIABLES (or
ELEMENTS )
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
CURRENT EFFECT(S)
LATER EFFECT(S)
• Factories•Mass
media • Advertising
2. Global warming
3. Burning dormitory
A1
EXAMPLE 2
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
3: State the 2nd Point of ActionTRIGGER
ELEMENTSCONTRIBUTING
VARIABLESURGENT NEED
(or PROBLEM SITUATION)
CURRENT EFFECT(S)
LATER EFFECT(S)
• Factories• Mass media • Advertising
• High carbon production• Consumer
culture
2. Global warming
A1 2
EXAMPLE 2
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
4: State the 3rd Point of ActionTRIGGER
ELEMENTSCONTRIBUTING VARIABLES (or
ELEMENTS )
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
CURRENT EFFECT(S)
LATER EFFECT(S)
• Factories• Mass media • Advertising
• High carbon production
• Consumer culture
2. Global warming
• Low food production• Illness and
disorders
AB C D E
EXAMPLE 2
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
5: State the 4th Point of ActionTRIGGER
ELEMENTSCONTRIBUTING VARIABLES (or
ELEMENTS )
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
CURRENT EFFECT(S)
LATER EFFECT(S)
• Factories• Mass
media • Advertising
• High carbon production
• Consumer culture
2. Global warming
• Low food production
• Illness and disorders
• Cities covered by sea water• Planet
unfit for human life
AB C D E
EXAMPLE 2
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
EXAMPLE 3IDENTIFY POINTS OF ACTION
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
1: State the Preliminary TopicTRIGGER
ELEMENTSCONTRIBUTING VARIABLES (or
ELEMENTS )
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
CURRENT EFFECT(S)
LATER EFFECT(S)
3. Burning dormitory
A
EXAMPLE 3
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
2: State the 1st Point of ActionTRIGGER
ELEMENTSCONTRIBUTING
VARIABLESURGENT NEED
(or PROBLEM SITUATION)
CURRENT EFFECT(S)
LATER EFFECT(S)
• Bad canteen food
3. Burning dormitory
A1
EXAMPLE 3
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
3: State the 2nd Point of ActionTRIGGER
ELEMENTSCONTRIBUTING
VARIABLESURGENT NEED
(or PROBLEM SITUATION)
CURRENT EFFECT(S)
LATER EFFECT(S)
• Bad canteen food
• Lack of food choices• Lack of
information about safe cooking practices• Students
cooking in bedrooms
3. Burning dormitory
A1 2
EXAMPLE 3
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
4: State the 3rd Point of ActionTRIGGER
ELEMENTSCONTRIBUTING
VARIABLESURGENT NEED
(or PROBLEM SITUATION)
CURRENT EFFECT(S)
LATER EFFECT(S)
• Bad canteen food
• Lack of food choices
• Lack of information about safe cooking practices
• Students cooking in bedrooms
3. Burning dormitory
• Loss of property• Disruption of learning• Increased management expenses
AB C D E
EXAMPLE 3
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
5: State the 4th Point of ActionTRIGGER
ELEMENTSCONTRIBUTING
VARIABLESURGENT NEED
(or PROBLEM SITUATION)
CURRENT EFFECT(S) LATER EFFECT(S)
• Bad canteen food
• Lack of food choices
• Lack of information about safe cooking practices
• Students cooking in bedrooms
3. Burning dormitory
• Loss of property• Disruption of learning• Increased management expenses
• More rules to follow• More clever ways of secret cooking•School can be shut down
AB C D E
EXAMPLE 3
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
identify potential proposals
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
In the process of identifying potential proposals, two other steps can be completed:
1.The Thesis Statement2.The Research Question
Potential Proposal: Point 1
TRIGGERCONTRIBUTING ELEMENTS (or
VARIABLES)
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
DIRECT (or IMMEDIATE) EFFECT(S)
INDIRECT (or LONG-TERM) EFFECT(S)
•Life away from family•Culture shock
1. Loneliness2. Lack of
information3. Lack of values
education
1. Pregnant college student
•Low grades•Loss of
scholarship•Forced marriage•Abortion of the
fetus
•Single motherhood•Ostracism by
family or culture•Poor career
prospects
NEED: Prevent pregnancy among college students in AIT Morocco
AB C D E
1. State an urgent need that can be met by a research paper.(1) Use a VERB. (2) Use a NOUN. (3) Specify BENEFICIARIES. (4) Don’t use adjectives.
VERB NOUN
Specific target
beneficiaries
CHECK: (1) Is there a verb? (2) Is there a noun? (3) Is this an approved research area? (4) Remove all adjectives.
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
WHY NO ADJECTIVES
A research paper must be written in an academic tone; objective language must be used.
Objective language requires that a topic must be measurable (can be measured) or quantifiable (can be counted).
Many adjectives and adverbs are impossible to quantify or to measure.
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
WHY NO ADJECTIVESAdjectives and adverbs are difficult to quantify
or to measure. They can be subjective. Verbs and nouns can be measured. They can be
objective.SUBJECTIVE LANGUAGE OBJECTIVE LANGUAGE: Measurable or countable ideas
They work hard. They work 10 hours a day.They work very hard. They work 22 hours a day.It is difficult to memorize 400 words a day.
Memorizing 400 words per day means memorizing about 17 words per hour or at least one word every three minutes.
This is a complicated solution.
This solution requires 14 steps, with an average of 10 elements per step.
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
Potential Proposal: Point 2
TRIGGERCONTRIBUTING VARIABLES (or
ELEMENTS)
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
DIRECT (or IMMEDIATE) EFFECT(S)
INDIRECT (or LONG-TERM) EFFECT(S)
•Life away from family•Culture shock
1.Loneliness2.Lack of
information3.Lack of
values education
1. Pregnant college student
•Low grades•Loss of scholarship•Forced marriage•Abortion of the fetus
•Single motherhood•Ostracism by family or culture•Poor career prospects
1.Provide peer support
2.Create sex education poster
3.Create values education poster
NEED: Prevent pregnancy among college students in AIT Morocco
AB C D E
2. State actions that can address contributing variables.
3
1
2
CHECK: (1) Can the action address the need? (2) Can you complete this action before deadline?
3
12
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
Potential Proposal: Point 3
TRIGGERCONTRIBUTING ELEMENTS (or
VARIABLES)
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
DIRECT (or IMMEDIATE) EFFECT(S)
INDIRECT (or LONG-TERM) EFFECT(S)
1.Life away from family
2.Culture shock
1.Loneliness2.Lack of
information3.Lack of
values education
1. Pregnant college student
•Low grades•Loss of scholarship•Forced marriage•Abortion of the fetus
•Single motherhood•Ostracism by family or culture•Poor career prospects
1.Create a family atmosphere on campus
2.Create poster of cultural adjustment techniques
1.Provide peer support
2.Create sex education poster
3.Create values education poster
NEED: Prevent pregnancy among college students in AIT Morocco
AB C D E
3. State possible actions that can address the triggers.
2
1
X
CHECK: (1) Can the action address the need? (2) Can you complete this action before deadline?
2
1
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
Potential Proposal: Point 4
TRIGGERCONTRIBUTING ELEMENTS (or
VARIABLES)
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
DIRECT (or IMMEDIATE) EFFECT(S)
INDIRECT (or LONG-TERM) EFFECT(S)
•Life away from family•Culture shock
1.Loneliness2.Lack of
information3.Lack of
values education
1. Pregnant college student
1.Low grades2.Loss of
scholarship3.Forced
marriage4.Abortion of
the fetus
1.Single motherhood
2.Ostracism by family or culture
3.Poor career prospects
1.Create a family atmosphere on campus
2.Create poster of cultural adjustment techniques
1.Provide peer support
2.Create sex education poster
3.Create values education poster
NEED: Prevent pregnancy among college students in AIT Morocco
1.Offer study tutorials
2.Find online other scholarships
3.Create anti-abortion posters
AB C D E
4. State possible actions that can address the immediate effects.
4
1
2
X
X
CHECK: (1) Can the action address the need? (2) Can you complete this action before deadline?
4
12
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
Potential Proposal: Point 5
TRIGGERCONTRIBUTING ELEMENTS (or
VARIABLES)
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
DIRECT (or IMMEDIATE) EFFECT(S)
INDIRECT (or LONG-TERM) EFFECT(S)
•Life away from family•Culture shock
1.Loneliness2.Lack of
information3.Lack of
values education
1. Pregnant college student
1.Low grades2.Loss of
scholarship3.Forced
marriage4.Abortion
1.Single motherhood
2.Ostracism by family or culture
3.Poor career prospects
1.Create a family atmosphere on campus
2.Create a cultural adjustment techniques poster
1.Provide peer support
2.Create a sex education poster
3.Create a values education poster
NEED: Prevent pregnancy among college students in AIT Morocco
1.Provide tutorials
2.Find alternative scholarships
3.Create anti-abortion posters
1.Create a skills poster for single mothers
2.Create an ostracism skills poster for single mothers
AB C D E
5. State possible actions that can address the long-term effects
X
X
X
X
1
2
CHECK: (1) Can the action address the need? (2) Can you complete this action before deadline?
1
2
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
Choose Your Proposal
TRIGGERCONTRIBUTING ELEMENTS (or
VARIABLES)
URGENT NEED (or PROBLEM SITUATION)
DIRECT (or IMMEDIATE) EFFECT(S)
INDIRECT (or LONG-TERM) EFFECT(S)
•Life away from family•Culture shock
1.Loneliness2.Lack of
information3.Lack of
values education
1. Pregnant college student
1.Low grades2.Loss of
scholarship3.Forced
marriage4.Abortion
1.Single motherhood
2.Ostracism by family or culture
3.Poor career prospects
1.Create a family atmosphere on campus
2.Create a cultural adjustment techniques poster
1.Provide peer support
2.Create a sex education poster
3.Create a values education poster
NEED: Prevent pregnancy among college students in AIT Morocco
1.Provide tutorials
2.Find alternative scholarships
3.Create anti-abortion posters
1.Create a skills poster for single mothers
2.Create a skills poster for single mothers who are ostracized
AB C D E
X
X
X
X
If possible choose one with (1) the most direct effects (2) the most preventive effects (3) the most long-term effects
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
Potential Proposals1. Create a cultural adjustment techniques
poster 2. Create a sex education poster3. Create a values education poster4. Create an abortion information poster5. Create a skills poster for single mothers6. Create a skills poster for single mothers who
are ostracized
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
objective selection
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Compared to arbitrary selection (selection based on chance, whim or personal choice) objectivity is a more respected method in academia as it shows a disciplined mind and a replicable process.
1. One way is to choose a proposal or topic according to rank of projected effects.
2. Another way is to choose a proposal or topic according to viability.
3. You can choose in other ways by using the same 3-step procedure 31 2
Top Three Proposals: Choose OneBased on an objective assessment of the possible
points of action for this topic, the proposed action can be:
1. Create a cultural shock coping poster for boys & girls (15/15 points)
2. Create a values education poster for girls and boys (15/12 points)
3. Create a help poster for ostracized single mothers (15/10 points)
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
Selection by Projected EffectsRanking of Effects of Proposed Actions A B C Total1. Create a cultural adjustment techniques poster for girls2. Create a sex education poster for girls3. Create a values education poster for girls and boys4. Create an abortion information poster for girls and boys5. Create a coping skills poster for single mothers6. Create a help poster for ostracized single mothers
Scoring Descriptive Value5 points Most effective4 points Above average effectiveness3 points Average effectiveness2 points Below average effectiveness1 points Least effective0 point No effectiveness
Assessment Areas
Descriptive Value
A Direct effectsB Preventive effectsC Long-term effects
CREATE A SCORING MATRIX SPECIFY THE ASSESSMENT AREAS
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
3
1 2
Selection by ViabilityRanking of Viability of Proposed Actions A B C D Total
1. Create a cultural shock coping poster for boys & girls
2. Create a sex education poster for girls
3. Create a values education poster for girls and boys
4. Create an abortion information poster for girls and boys
5. Create a coping skills poster for single mothers
6. Create a help poster for ostracized single mothers
Scoring Descriptive Value
5 points Most effective
4 points Above average effectiveness
3 points Average effectiveness
2 points Below average effectiveness
1 points Least effective
0 point No effectiveness
Assessment Areas
Descriptive Value
A Availability of text
B Availability of graphics
C Design simplicity
D Cultural acceptability
CREATE A SCORING MATRIX SPECIFY THE ASSESSMENT AREAS
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
3
1 2
problem statement
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
A one-sentence problem statement tells the reader •What the writer intends to do or produce in how much time •On what topic to solve what specific problem•Who specifically benefits from the proposal•What original elements are used and with what theoretical support
An original statement can prove that the writer is able to communicate clearly and to use the highest levels of cognitive thought (Bloom, 1956).
A clear problem statement ensures that the later part of the research process are easier and faster. This is essential when there is limited time for completing a research proposal or paper.
One-sentence Problem Statement 1/3This is a proposal to create a poster for
male and female students in AIT Morocco showing 15 pictures with English text on how to cope with culture shock, with the aim of preventing student pregnancies in the school.
POOR: The reader may not see a clear connection between culture shock and pregnancy.
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
One-sentence Problem Statement 2/3To help prevent unwanted pregnancies in
AIT Morocco, this writer proposes to create in three days an A3-sized colored poster with 15 pictures and English text to illustrate the 15 most universal moral values.
GOOD: The reader may see a clear connection between universal moral values and unwanted pregnancies. The proposed action specifies time and product. The product can be visualized by the reader.
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
One-sentence Problem Statement 3/3To help prevent unwanted pregnancies in AIT
Morocco, this paper proposes to present in 2 weeks an A4-sized colored handbill with 10 pictures and English-French text to show 10 ways – which are difficult - for ostracized single mothers to continue their education.
VERY GOOD: A reader can see a connection between difficult futures and preventing unwanted pregnancies. The proposal specifies action, timeframe and output. The product can be visualized in the reader’s mind.
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
thesis statement
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
A thesis statement is not a conclusion. It is not a statement that is clearly true or clearly false. It is not a universal truth.
A thesis statement is a debatable idea: it can be true or false. It is the main idea that will be proved or disproved in the proposed research paper.
The Thesis Statement
The topic sentence is a statement of your point of action.
This is that point where the proposed action intends to meet a target need or solve a target problem.
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
The Thesis Statement
First, you must identify all points of action in your proposal.
Then, you identify potential proposals.When your begin to identify potential
proposals, the thesis statement is born.
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Thesis Statement 1/3Student pregnancies in AIT Morocco can
be avoided by showing 15 pictures with English text on how to cope with culture shock.
POOR: The reader may not see a clear connection between culture shock and pregnancy.
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
Thesis Statement 2/3Student pregnancies in AIT Morocco can
be avoided by displaying A3-sized colored posters with 15 pictures and English text to illustrate the 15 most universal moral values.
GOOD: The reader may see a clear connection between universal moral values and unwanted pregnancies. The product can be visualized by the reader.
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
Thesis Statement 3/3Student pregnancies in AIT Morocco can be
avoided by distributing A4-sized colored handbills with 10 pictures and English-French text to show 10 difficult ways for ostracized single mothers to continue their education.
VERY GOOD: A reader can see a connection between difficult futures and preventing unwanted pregnancies. The product can be visualized in the reader’s mind.
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
research question
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
A thesis statement is a debatable idea that can be true or false. Its is the main idea that can be proved or disproved in the proposal. It can be a statement or a question.
When a thesis statement is stated as a question, it can be called a Research Question.
Research Question 1/3Can student pregnancies in AIT Morocco
be avoided by showing 15 pictures with English text on how to cope with culture shock?
GOOD: The reader may not see a clear connection between culture shock and pregnancy. This question can help the reader see that connection.
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
Research Question 2/3Can student pregnancies in AIT Morocco
be avoided by displaying A3-sized colored posters with 15 pictures and English text to illustrate the 15 most universal moral values?
GOOD: This question can help the reader understand the connection between universal moral values and unwanted pregnancies. The product can be visualized by the reader.
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
Research Question 3/3Can student pregnancies in AIT Morocco be
avoided by distributing A4-sized colored handbills with 10 pictures and English-French text to show 10 difficult ways for ostracized single mothers to continue their education?
VERY GOOD: This question can help the reader understand the connection between difficult futures and preventing unwanted pregnancies. The product can be visualized in the reader’s mind.
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
Research Question 4What can best help prevent student pregnancies in AIT
Morocco? A. A poster for male and female students in AIT Morocco showing
15 pictures with English text on how to cope with culture shock B. An A3-sized colored poster with 15 pictures and English text to
illustrate the 15 most universal moral values C. A4-sized colored handbills with 10 pictures and English-French
text to show 10 difficult ways for ostracized single mothers to continue their education
D. A combination of ___ and ___E. Other: _____________________________________
EXCELLENT: A reader can see that a survey will be used as an objective method to identify the most effective method. Survey respondents can create other options.
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
CHOOSE YOUR POINT OF ACTION
synthesis
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Another way of saying synthesis is “successful combination”• Synthesis –The proposal combines old ideas into a new idea • Parts – The synthesis can be only parts of different ideas; it can
be entire or whole ideas combined.• Viable synthesis – The synthesis should be successful. That
means that the combination should work, should be effective in solving the problem situation or meeting the urgent need.
Summary: SYNTHESIS
A problem statement can be original when synthesis is used. Synthesis is when ideas (or parts of ideas) are combined into something new.
The synthesized idea should solve a problem situation or meet an urgent need.
The idea should be viable; it can can be successfully completed within a specific or limited time and with specific or limited resources.
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
ExampleSynthesis is when you combine elements or parts of elements to create something new (See Unexpected connections).
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Image courtesy of Andrew Kelsall at www.designsoak.com.
Image courtesy of weheartit.com.
Image courtesy of Andrew Kelsall at www.designsoak.com.
Example: SynthesisTOPIC BENEFICIARIES URGENT NEED REQUIREMENT INPUT
malnourished infants in Somaliland
minimize infant mortality rate
provide alternative nourishment immediately
local financing for moringa feeding and planting programs
failing high school chemistry students in Agdao
pass a test in Chemistry 101
memorize the entire periodic table of chemical elements in seven days
low-vocabulary AiU scholars in the BSBF program
increase grades of essays and research papers
get a 100% score in Academic Word List tests in 10 weeks
Synthesis: Combine ideas or parts of ideas to create something new
DESCRIBE THE ORIGINAL INPUT
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Example: SYNTHESISLocal financing for planting programs and regular feeding of
nursing mothers and infants with moringa powderSynthesis: This proposal combines the concept of local financing
with the ideas of moringa cultivation. Rationale: Local financing can help villagers avoid state corruption.
Local cultivation can create a year-round supply of moringa powder, which has been proven to lower infant mortality (www.moringanews.org/documents/Nutrition.pdf).
Original Input: While the concept has been successfully implemented in other places, it has not been proposed for the target beneficiaries of this study. Information posters and instruction leaflets in English and in the local language will be designed.
Rating: Good synthesis of different ideas
DESCRIBE THE ORIGINAL INPUT
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Search Keywords
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
increased values
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Increased values – an old idea but with better efficiency, better effects or results in shorter time, and using less resources or less effort.
The writer must say and prove that, compared to its original version, results of this idea are better, faster, more effective, or use less resources or effort.
Example: Increased ValuesTOPIC BENEFICIARIES URGENT NEED REQUIREMENT INPUT
malnourished infants in Somaliland
minimize infant mortality rate
provide alternative nourishment immediately
local financing for moringa feeding and planting programs
failing high school chemistry students in Agdao
pass a test in Chemistry 101
memorize the entire periodic table of chemical elements in seven days
Use shouting as a strategy to accurately remember 20 names of scientific elements per hour
low-vocabulary AiU scholars in the BSBF program
increase grades of essays and research papers
get a 100% score in Academic Word List tests in 10 weeks
Increased Values: More or better results can be achieved within a shorter time
DESCRIBE THE ORIGINAL INPUT
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Example: INCREASED VALUESUse of repeated shouting as a strategy to accurately remember 20 names of scientific elements per hour
DESCRIBE THE ORIGINAL INPUT
Synthesis for Increased Values: This proposal combines the concept of repeated shouting with the idea of memorization. This proposal increases the value of the memorization technique, and the value of shouting.
Rationale: The target location includes uninhabited open fields where repeated shouting can be practiced. Repetition and loud volume can help students memorize scientific information. Theory support: Spaced repetition (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Spaced_repetition)
Original Input: While the concept has been successfully implemented in other places, it has never been used in the location of the target beneficiaries. An instruction poster will be designed for student use.
Rating: Very good theory support (See How to Use Theory)LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Search Keywords
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
unexpected connections
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Unexpected connections – the proposed idea clearly connects seemingly unconnected ideas to increase values, viability, or versatility
The writer must say and prove that, this idea is used for the first time in a particular place, language, purpose, or context (first time in Aiu, first time in Bahasa Indonesia, first time used to solve a hygiene problem, first time used in international context)
Example: Unexpected ConnectionsTOPIC BENEFICIARIES URGENT NEED REQUIREMENT INPUT
malnourished infants in Somaliland
minimize infant mortality rate
provide alternative nourishment immediately
financing for moringa feeding and planting programs
failing high school chemistry students in Agdao
pass a test in Chemistry 101
memorize the entire periodic table of chemical elements in seven days
Use shouting as a strategy to accurately remember 20 elements per hour
low-vocabulary AiU scholars in the BSBF program
increase grades of essays and research papers
get a 100% score in an Academic Word List (AWL ) test within 10 weeks
Assign each student to create within one week one test with indigenous pictures
Unexpected connections: Show clear connections between elements that seem to be unconnected
DESCRIBE THE ORIGINAL INPUT
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Example: UNEXPECTED CONNECTION
Assign each student to create one Academic Word List test in one week, using indigenous pictures
DESCRIBE THE ORIGINAL INPUT
Synthesis with Unexpected Connections: This proposal combines the ideas of learning by teaching others and of native language as a learning strategy. It is not expected for students to create tests or exam questions, or to use indigenous materials such as pictures in creating tests.
Rationale: Learning by teaching others is said to result in 95% retention of information (www.psychotactics.com/blog/art-retain-learning/) while bilingual ESL strategies are accepted practices (www.cal.org/resources/digest/rennie01.html).
Original Input: Unlike bilingual strategies, this proposal uses only home-culture images to help learn new words. This, and the idea of students creating tests, have never been used in AiU. An instruction poster will be designed for student use.
Rating: Excellent. Both ideas are supported by theory.
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Search Keywords
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
viability
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Viability – an idea can be completed before a deadline to achieve a specific goal
On the other hand, increased viability can be stated as: “Compared to its original version, this idea is easier (or faster) to complete.” The writer must then show details to prove or support this statement.
Example: ViabilityTOPIC BENEFICIARIES URGENT NEED REQUIREMENT INPUT
malnourished infants in Somaliland
minimize infant mortality rate
provide alternative nourishment immediately
I will submit in 3 days a draft of a promotion poster for local financing of moringa feeding & planting programs
failing high school chemistry students in Agdao
pass a test in Chemistry 101
memorize the entire periodic table of chemical elements in seven days
I will present in 7 days an instruction poster that shows how to use repeated shouting to memorize information
low-vocabulary AiU scholars in the BSBF program
increase grades of essays and research papers
get a 100% score in an Academic Word List (AWL ) test within 10 weeks
In 2 weeks, I can create an information poster that shows why students who create a test with pictures can pass that test.
Viability: That something can be successfully completed within a specific and limited time and resources
DESCRIBE THE ORIGINAL INPUT
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
application flexibility
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
Application flexibility, versatility, or universality – an idea that is proposed to meet a specific need or solve a particular problem situation can be used in many other contexts.
The writer might state and prove it: “Compared to its original version, this idea can be used in many other ways such as....” The writer must then show details to prove or support this statement.
new uses
LAST VIEWED NEXT SLIDELAST SLIDEFIRST SLIDE PREVIOUS SLIDEEND SHOW
New Uses– an idea that is used for specific needs or particular problem situation is proposed to be used in new ways.
The writer might state and prove it: “This idea, usually used for... can be used effectively other ways such as....” The writer must then show details to prove or support this statement.
ORIGINAL INPUTSUMMARY POINT OF ACTION THESIS STATEMENT
RESEARCH QUESTION SYNTHESIS INCREASED VALUES UNEXPECTED CONNECTIONS VIABILITY
VERSATILITY NEW USES
STATEMENT OF THE RESEARCH PROBLEM – STEP # 11
Image courtesy of www.scholarshipscouts.org
MY PROBLEM STATEMENT HAS MORE OF THESE, SO MY THESIS STATEMENT
AND RESEARCH QUESTION ARE MORE ORIGINAL... YES!
THANK YOU
END OF PRESENTATIONSend suggestions or comments to [email protected]
Concepts used in this presentation are from various online sources. No copyright infringement intended.