presented by: christan williams 6 th grade ela june 18, 2013 digging out the crystals: using...
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PRESENTED BY:CHRISTAN WILLIAMS
6TH GRADE ELAJUNE 18, 2013
Digging out the Crystals: Using Writer’s Notebooks to
Enhance the Writer’s Workshop
Turn and Talk: Do you currently use a Writer’s Notebook with your
students?
If so, how do you use them?
How are they organized?
If not, what’s something you hope to learn about them during this demonstration?
Turn and Talk
What are your roadblocks with using Writer’s Notebooks?
Instructional Roadblock
I’ve always used Writer’s notebooks in my classroom. Mostly, they’ve been used for students to collect
ideas on “seed pages” for future writing. The writer’s notebooks became the back-up work for
independent writing time—something that was not used frequently during our units of study in the
Writer’s Workshop. Some students even used it for drafting with little to no planning.
My goal is to understand how to more effectively implement the use of Writer’s notebooks as a multi-functional tool that enhances and personalizes the
Writer’s Workshop experience for my students.
Objectives:
What are Writer’s Notebooks?How can Writer’s Notebooks be used more
effectively to help students become better writers?
What strategies can be used to help students create more meaningful pieces of writing through the use of Writer’s notebooks?
How can Writer’s notebooks aid students in becoming more reflective writers?
How can Writer’s notebooks be assessed?
Are you ready for a learning journey into the world of note booking?
Take out a sheet of paper and get ready to dig out your own personal crystals.
What it is…What it is… What it isn’t…What it isn’t…
A place for writers to explore and rehearse the art of writing
A place for writers to save their words; an empty ditch, waiting to be filled
A place to keep a list of strategies studied in Writer’s Workshop
A place to include examples of good writing from other texts (mentor texts)
A place to keep notes on mini lessons A place for students to try strategies
introduced in mini-lessons A place to collect what you notice
during close study as a reference tool An essential tool for writing conferences A notebook that most suitably reflects the
writer
A journal (“A day in the life…”) A diary A place for solely drafting or
publishing A scrapbook
Writer’s Notebooks
Considerations for Launching the Writer’s Notebook
From Aimee Buckner’s Notebook Know-How
Notebook Setup
Student (and teacher) friendlyMini-lessons and toolboxes in the front/backStudent writing in a separate sectionTable of ContentsDated and numbered pagesIf using a binder, tabs could be useful for
organizing
Introducing the Notebook
Picture BooksHeart MapNeighborhood MapHistory of a nameListsI-chartQuestionsI WonderABCs of Writing
Discuss a writer’s life, why we write and our writing territories
Teacher models using a notebook
Students personalize their notebooks
Set expectations for the notebook from the beginning
Keep the notebooks organized for easy reference
Let’s Try a Strategy: The Neighborhood Map
Draw a sketch of the neighborhood you grew up in or have the most memories in.
Try to label the “hot spots:” places in your neighborhood that you remember a particular
event vividly
Consider how can your map be used for your writing.
Writing Territories
Topics Genres Audiences
Going beyond “Seed Pages” to Strategy Lessons
Develop a topic by noticing patterns in the notebook Daily Pages Writing off literature Writing from a word Observations Re-reading and highlighting Lifting a line Favorite collection Writing from another POV Interviews Listing the possibilities Researching to develop an idea
Turn and talk: How can we apply these strategies across the content areas?
Living Like a Writer…
“Don’t be afraid to live like a writer. Writers explore. There are two whole universes for you to explore—the one on the inside, and the physical one on the outside. Take your choice; inner or outer. Or best: both.”
-Ralph FletcherBreathing In, Breathing
Out
Meaningful Mini-lessons
Notebook setup Purposes for writing Audience Structure Craft Genre
Tabs for each genre Noticing chart with craft
features Multi-genre studies
Word Choice Stamina Vocabulary
Connotation/Denotation Personal word bank
Revision strategies (toolbox) Beginnings Endings Sentence structure &
variety Back up work Close study of the writing
process Put it away and come
back later
Understanding Genre Structure
Literary NonfictionWhat I can expect Elements of Literary Nonfiction What I
Need to as a reader Know as a Writer
From Notebook Know-How by Aimee Buckner
Self-Selected Genre Studies
Too many genre studies, back to back, can limit students’ opportunities to be initiators of writing
Give students time to explore self-selected topics and genres of writing More willing to take risks and more likely to become
life-long writers, when they are given the right to see that writing can be used for personal objectives
Accountability is key Student planning sheet (handout)
“It’s not what a piece of writing is about, but how it’s written, that makes
good writing good.”
-Katie Wood Ray, Wondrous Words
The Reading-Writing Connection
“I learned to write from writers. I didn’t know any personally, but I read.”
- Cynthia Rylant
So, what do gain from writers?An understanding of craft, structure, genre, purpose, style,
etc.
Chart authors styles Collect compelling words Chart interesting leads
Try 10!
Mapping the text
Author Style Noticing Chart
Author Style Example Text Reference
Reflective Writers
Re-read notebook entries daily Encourage students to share what strategies they attempted in
their writing Set goals for writing Writing across the curriculum tasks (digging deep)
How-to writing Feature articles Poems with 2 voices Historical narratives
Self-assess writing What parts will the reader enjoy? Are there any parts where my reader might get confused? Have I left out any information the writer needs in order to
understand what I’m trying to say?
The daily practice of craft sharpens the writer’s vision and tunes the writer’s voice.
Habit makes writing easy.
-Don Murray
Notebooks as an Assessment Tool
Formative Assessments Writing process, writing techniques, initiating writing
Self-evaluations (see handout)Accountability rubric
Consider your goals and values for the notebook Is organization important? Do you value students’ process of writing—tied to the unit of
study? Do you want to see evidence of how the notebook helped
them thoughtfully draft and plan?
Portfolio AssessmentParent conferences
THENTHEN NOWNOW
Student ownershipComposition
notebooks – don’t tear out the pages!
A place to collect ideasA place to practice
writing Try it; no risks
No notesImages welcome
Student ownership (i.e. personalizing) “If the notebook is to be a useful tool, it must be
useful to the writer first, and the reader (teacher) second.”
Aimee Buckner, from Notebook Know-How A place for writers to save their words and
collect others: “memory, reflection, sketch, scrap of print taped to a page” – Aimee Buckner
Practice writing in any form Find ideas Can and should be teacher guided A place to build writing fluency A place of discovery A safe place for students to write Multi-purpose tool: reflective, assessment,
reference, collaborative GOAL: to develop INDEPENDENT writers
Reflecting on the Journey of Writer’s Notebooks in the Classroom…
Why use Writer’s Notebooks?
CCSS places emphasis on: Three types of writing (narrative, informational, persuasive) The writing process The quality of student writing Writing as integral Writing across all disciplines for real purposes
Anchor standard 5: students should be able to “develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising and editing” with
expectations for revision and independence increasing with age. Anchor standard 10: students will “write routinely over extended
time frames (time for research, reflection and revision) and shorter time frames
Turn and Talk
How can you make Writer’s Notebooks work in your classroom? Discuss specific example and
be ready to share.
Works Cited
Anderson, Carl. Assessing Writers. Heinemann, 2005.
Atwell, Nancie. In the Middle. Heinemann, 1998.
Buckner, Aimee. Notebook Know-How. Stenhouse Publishers, 2005.
Calkins, Lucy, Ehrenworth, Mary., Lehman, Christopher. Pathways to the Common Core. Heinemann, 2012.
Fletcher, Ralph. A Writer’s Notebook: Unlocking the Writer Within You. HarperTrophy, 2000.