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Page 1: PEER EDITING  Head 2 sheets of paper; SUBJECT: Peer Editing Essay #2.  Take out your green, Argumentative Rubric

PEER EDITING

Head 2 sheets of paper;

SUBJECT: Peer Editing

Essay #2.

Take out your green,

Argumentative Rubric.

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BEAN TREESB Y B A R B A R A K I N G S O LV E R

“In a world as wrong as this one, all we can do is make things as right

as we can.” 

“There were two things about Mama. One is she always expected the

best out of me. And the other is that then no matter what I did,

whatever I came home with, she acted like it was the moon I had just

hung up in the sky and plugged in all the stars. Like I was that good.” 

“I had decided early on that if I couldn’t dress elegant, I’d dress

memorable.” 

“It's terrible to lose somebody, but it's also true that some people

never have anybody to lose, and I think that's got to be so much

worse.” 

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THE POISONWOOD BIBLEB Y B A R B A R A K I N G S O LV E R

“Don’t try to make life a mathematics problem with yourself in

the center and everything coming out equal. When you’re good,

bad things can still happen. And if you’re bad, you can still be

lucky.” 

“Listen. Slide the weight from your shoulders and move forward.

You are afraid you might forget, but you never will. You will forgive

and remember.” 

“Everything you're sure is right can be wrong in another place. ” 

“I’ve seen how you can’t learn anything when you’re trying to

look like the smartest person in the room.” 

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TRASHB Y A N D Y M U L L I G A N

"With the right key you can bust the door wide open. Because

nobody's going to open it for you." 

"I learned perhaps more than any university could ever teach me. I

learned that the world revolves around money. There are values and

virtues and morals; there are relationships and trust and love---and all

of that is important. Money, however, is more important and it is

dripping all the time, like precious water. Some drink deep; others

thirst. Without money, you shrivel and die. The absence of money is

drought in which nothing can grow. Nobody knows the value of water

until they've lived in a dry, dry place---like Behala. So many people,

waiting for the rain."

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NAVY SEAL DOGSB Y M I K E R I T L A N D

Trident K9 Warriors gave readers an inside look at

the Navy SEALteams' elite K9 warriors—who they

are, how they are trained, and the extreme missions

they undertake to save lives. From detecting

explosives to eliminating the bad guys, these

powerful dogs are also some of the smartest and

highest skilled working animals on the planet. Mike

Ritland's job is to train them.

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CHEW ON THISB Y E R I C S C H L O S S E R & C H A R L E S W I L S O N

“And workers who needed to go to the bathroom weren't allowed to

take a break. They were forced to pee right on the slaughterhouse

floor, near meat that people would soon be eating.” 

FROM THE AUTHOR…

“The United States now has more prison inmates than full-time

farmers.”

“Twenty years ago, teenage boys in the United States drank twice as

much milk as soda; now they drink twice as much soda as milk.”

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T H E S TAT I S T I C A L P R O B A B I L I T Y O F L O V E AT F I R S T S I G H T

B Y E R I C S C H L O S S E R & C H A R L E S W I L S O N

“It's not the changes that will break your heart; it's that

tug of familiarity.”

“Who would have guessed that four minutes could

change everything?” 

“Is it possible not to ever know your type-not to even

know you have a type-until quite suddenly you do?” 

“There’s always a gap between the burn and the sting

of it, the pain and the realization.”

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PEER EDITING Head 2 sheets of paper; SUBJECT: Peer Editing Essay #2 Write your name on the back of the green score sheet.

On the first sheet of paper:

1. Write peer’s name and period.2. Write topic of paper.3. Read the essay.4. Score and reasoning for each:

― Purpose, Focus, and Organization (2-3 sentence response)― Evidence and Elaboration (2-3 sentence response)― Conventions of Standard English (1 sentence response)― Switch papers with your shoulder partner and repeat for the

second peer.