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My Draft Analysis

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My Draft Analysis

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From the feedback received from my draft magazine it has been very positive. Most people really like the designs and how it looks different to everyone else’s as I have chosen a unique music genre. The only negative piece of feedback I have received from my classmates would be to go around the “SANG” image again to get rid of small white areas around the image and then to maybe add an article name that introduces the interview.