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Hess Education. “ But in science the credit goes to the man who convinces the world, not to the man whom the idea first occurs.” -Sir Francis Darwin. Writing Hint. Process Writing. Approach writing as a continuous iterative process. Drafting. Structuring. Re-viewing. - PowerPoint PPT PresentationTRANSCRIPT
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Hess Education
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“But in science the credit goes to the man who convinces the world, not to the man whom the idea first occurs.”
-Sir Francis Darwin
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Writing Hint
Approach writing as a continuous iterative process.
Re-viewing
Drafting
Structuring
Generating Ideas
Focusing
Evaluating
White & Arndt (1991)
Process Writing
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Your Parameters
Constraints(external) Choices(internal)Audience Topic (?)Format StructureMechanics DepthPolitics Language
Illustration
Adapted from Hua-Kuang Liu, PowerPoint, for “Effective Science and Engineering Communication”
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Common Problems
1. Articles [1-19]2. Pronoun references [1-1]3. Plurals [1-1]4. Verb/Noun agreement [8-45. Verb tense [4-1] [5-3] [1-1]6. Modifier with modified [5-1] [1-1] [1-2][1-6][2-1]
[8-5][10-]7. Split infinitive [9-3][9-3][9-4]8. Dangling participle [4-2]9. Word Choice
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Writing Hint
1. Tell them what you are going to tell
2. Tell them
3. Tell them what you told
Beginning MiddleEnd
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Writing Hint
Know your audience and write from the reader’s perspective.
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Writing Hint
• Special difficulties in Technical Writing– Complex subjects– Complicated insider’s language
• Compensate for these
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Writing Hint
• Generate a large body of ideas to define the scope of your project
• Define your Basic Research Question
• Focus on a one-sentence Thesis Statement answering the Question
• Find a Hook
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Writing Hint
• Numbers Rule– of 3:
• For powerful sets, or• To make the middle item the winner
– of 2: for contrasts– of 5: >5 is often too much
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Sentence Hints
• Focus on the main idea
• Combine choppy sentences
• Simplify sentences
• Use a variety of sentences
• Use a variety of sentence openings
• Use parallelism
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Word Choice Hints
• Do not omit needed words• Eliminate redundant words• Place modifiers with their subject• Keep verbs consistent in tense and the active
voice• Use the active voice (replace “be” verbs)• Use appropriate language• Use exact language• Keep your voice consistent (I, we, etc.)
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Writing Hint
• The rule of three revisited: Editing
• Write Rest Rewrite
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Writing Hint
• Polishing or editing, like writing, is a continuous iterative process
• BUT
• Unless you have enough written there is not enough to polish!– Write first– Polish later
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ESL Hint
1. Good writing varies by culture, in addition to varying by audience, discipline and purpose, i.e. direct or indirect, personal or impersonal, plain or embellished, etc.
2. Vague is bad in English technical writing.Some, however, intentionally write vaguely, attempting
to demonstrate their greater wisdom with seductive phrases and illusory allusions rather than speaking in diamorphous linear constructions thereby befuddling those readers lacking a clear personal sense of rectitude.
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ESL Hint
In English writers are expected to cite all sources. This includes as much detail as is available.
For instance, the page number if available.
[Make it easy for the reader to check!}
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ESL Hint
• Chinese allows the omission of the subject or the verb.
• English almost always requires you to state the subject and verb. – Expect in commands ( Be quiet!)– When the subject is impLiud or– In some special exceptions
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ESL Hint
• English spelling differs slightly from country to country.• The primary difference is American or British• Choose one system and stick with it.
– Color Colour– Theater Theatre– Judgment Judgement– Defense Defence– Analyze Analyse
• Hppt://www.english.uiuc.edu/cwa/wworkshop/• Hppt:/www.owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/general/
index.html#effective
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Selecting Wining Topics
• Ask the field (journals)
• Ask the experts (professor)
• Ask the next stars (colleagues)
• Ask What?1. Research Question
2. Thesis Statement
3. Idea Set
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From Idea Set to Research Question
• It IS-- a Question– Narrow– Challenging – Grounded
• What you want to Answer
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Thesis Statement
• This is the sentence stating the main point.– A generalization, not a fact– Limited, not too broad– Focused, not too vague
• Essentially the Title of your work
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Thesis Hooks
• Startling statistic or fact
• Vivid example
• Description
• Quotation
• Question
• Analogy
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Topic Sentence
• Is the Thesis Statement for the paragraph.
• Is usually at the start
• Signals the next step in the argument– Suggests the next topic– Helps the transition
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Structure-Paragraphs
1. Focus the Main Point-Topic Sentence• Usually first• Sometimes after a transition• Occasionally at the end
2. Develop the main point- too short is often too little
3. Organize the paragraph• Methods include: examples, description, process,
comparison, contrast, definition, cause and effect, classification and division, etc.
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Structure-Paragraphs cont’d
4. Make the Paragraph Coherent• Link-ideas• Repeat key words• Use parallel structure (parallelism)• Be consistent• Provide Transitions (handout)
5. Adjust Paragraph Length
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The Final Product
• Editing/Poilshing– Sentence– Paragraph– Global
• Using editing codes
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Your Parameters
Constraints(external) Choices(internal)Audience Topic (?)Format StructureMechanics DepthPolitics Language
Illustration
Adapted from Hua-Kuang Liu, PowerPoint, for “Effective Science and Engineering Communication”
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Writing Hint
Approach writing as a continuous iterative process.
Re-viewing
Drafting
Structuring
Generating Ideas
Focusing
Evaluating
White & Arndt (1991)
Process Writing
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Common Problems
1. Articles2. Pronoun references3. Plurals 4. Verb/Noun agreement5. Verb tense6. Modifier with modified7. Split infinitive8. Dangling participle9. Word Choice10. Possessive
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Rules I:Figures/Table/Graphs
Purpose1. Extends the argument
2. Simplifies complex
3. Allows visual comparison
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Rules II:Figures/Table/Graphs
Location1. Requires a mention in the text.
2. As close to the mention as possible.
3. After the mention
4. Reasonable location
5. Esthetically pleasing [looks good]
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Rules III:Figures/Table/Graphs
Naming1. Titled
2. Spelled out
3. Sequentially numbered, followed by (period)
4. Centered, bolded, (below)
5. Same font size and type as text
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Rules IV:Figures/Table/Graphs
Content1. Labeled
2. Abbreviations explained in1. Text
2. Legend
3. Label
3. Readable
4. Consistent
5. No unlabeled data breaks