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Lillis and Grainger Focus on student-tutor talkDraft 3/6/98
Exploring the socio-discursive space of higher education: focus on
student-tutor talk
Theresa Lillis and Karen Grainger
Sheffield Hallam University
Paper presented at Higher Education Close Up, an international conference from 6-8 July 1998 at University of Central Lancashire, Preston. This conference is jointly hosted by the Department of Educational Research, Lancaster University and the Department of Education Studies, University of Central Lancashire and is supported by the Society for Research into Higher Education
1 Background to this paper
The idea for this paper grew out of comments made by students participating in a
research project exploring their experience of making meaning in academic writing 1.
A prominent theme to emerge from this study was that of student dissatisfaction with
the limited opportunity for face-to-face talk with tutors. Where talk did occur, the
students often expressed disappointment with such talk. Implicit in the students’
stated dissatisfaction and common desire for greater opportunities to engage in such
talk was a presumed usefulness of such talk for their learning and participation in
higher education. Their comments, alongside our own unease as tutors in higher
education (henceforward HE) about the increasingly limited opportunities for talk
with students, led us to want to focus on tutor/student face-to-face talk within the
context of the current shifting socio-discursive space of the university.
2. How this paper is organized
The central argument of this paper is that there is a need to focus in detail on the
socio-discursive practices of the university in order to explore both what the
university is and does, as currently configured, as well as what it might be and do. We
are using socio-discursive space here to signal our focus on the part played by
language-as-discourse in constituting, that is in reproducing and potentially
transforming, the university as a social institution. Our interest is to explore the ways
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in which actual discourse practices, in this paper actual talk between tutor and
student, reflect, constitute and potentially contribute to transforming the nature of the
university at the levels of the context of situation and the context of culture. In
exploring this socio-discursive space we draw on the work of Fairclough in critical
discourse analysis (see Fairclough 1992 ).
This paper is exploratory. We see it as the beginning of a larger project- both in terms
of our own work and the work within the research community- to explore the nature
of the socio-discursive space, and hence the nature of, the university.
The paper is organized around the following sections:
· an overview of key dimensions of the wide ranging relevant research on talk and
learning at school level in England, as compared with the limited research
carried out to date on talk and learning in HE
· an outline of Fairclough’s framework for analyzing socio-discursive practices
· a preliminary description of the shifting socio-discursive space of one university
· analysis of specific instances of student/tutor face-to-face talk around the teaching
and learning of one prominent institutional practice, that of academic writing.
We conclude by summarizing what our focus on face-to-face student/tutor talk tells
us about the current socio-discursive space of HE and suggest future directions for
this research.
3 Key dimensions to research focusing on tutor/student talk
3.1 School based research
Whilst the activity of talk between teachers and pupils in compulsory schooling has
been the focus of research in Britain for some time, little research has been carried
out on such talk in Britain. The aim of this section is to foreground key dimensions
emerging from school based studies which we think can usefully inform approaches
to researching this area in HE.
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Certain interests and theoretical perspectives emerge as central in school based
research on talk and learning. These are as follows: the interactive nature of teaching
and learning; the centrality of language in and for teaching and learning; talk as
teaching and learning particular social practices.
3.1.1 The interactive nature of teaching and learning
Whilst there are differing emphases, the notion that teaching and learning are
fundamentally interactive in nature is central to much school based writings on talk
and learning. Drawing on social theories of learning, in particular the work of
Vygotsky (1986) and Bruner (1983, 1986), school based research has focused on the
importance of talk for teaching and learning in general. Barnes and Britton brought
educationalists attention to the significance of teacher-pupil interaction in teaching
and learning. They identified and critiqued a transmission model of learning, where
there is an assumed flow of information from teacher to pupil, contrasting this view
of learning/teaching with studies emphasizing a view of children as active seekers of
meaning (see for example Barnes, Britton and Rosen 1969). Their work connects with
later studies by Wells, where the comparatively limited opportunities for purposeful
pupil talk within school are compared with the wide range of possibilities for talk in
the home (see for example Wells 1985, 1986).
Axiomatic to the perspective of Barnes and Britton is to start from where the child is,
(see Bullock Report 1975: 143) . Barnes states that this is an essential part of
developing, refining, or even correcting their (pupils’) existing understanding (Barnes
1990:45) thus explaining the importance he attaches to focusing on teacher/pupil talk
in order to discuss the extent and ways in which the teacher and pupil successfully
manage to negotiate meanings.
The pioneering work of Barnes and Britton has informed much research in Britain on
talk and learning at school level to date, including focuses on peer group talk
( Phillips 1988; Westgate and Corden 1993); differing educational functions of talk
( Berrill 1988; Wells 1989; Fisher 1994; ) talk and literacy (Lunzer and Gardener
1978; Wells 1990; Wells and Chang 1986); talk and computers ( Fisher 1992; Mercer
1994 ). It has also been influential in educational policy making and practice (see
Bullock Report 1975), notably through the language across the curriculum movement
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which, although seems to have had little impact in FE and HE in Britain, has
significantly contributed to debates at both compulsory schooling in Britain and in FE
and HE levels in both Australia and North America ( see Luke and others 1989 for
Australia; see Ackerman 1993 for North America).
3.1.2 The centrality of language in and for talking to teach/learn
A focus on learning as interactive in nature inevitably involves an exploration of the
medium of that interaction. Thus language, both what it is and what it does, was
brought to the centre of attention. The ways in which the language of talk has been
analyzed varies. Within the field of education, the work of Barnes, referred to above,
is prominent. In his analyses of student/teacher talk, he focuses on language in two
ways; language as interaction and language as resource. In exploring language as
interaction, that is what is done with and through language, he typically draws on his
understandings of schooling to describe the nature of the contributions in talk. His
principal aim is to interpret what is being done in talk, for example, the teacher
defines the topic (Barnes 1990: 42)-which is used in turn to interpret what the
participants think they are doing- it as if there were two language games: the students
were playing the Describe-the-Picture game, whereas the teacher wanted the Hunt-
the Word game (Barnes 1990:42). This work focuses on extracts of talk to highlight
how and why particular types of talk are (un)successful in teaching and learning.
Barnes argues that the encouragement of pupils’ talk in the classroom is essential to
successful teaching/learning as the teacher becomes familiar with what and how,(that
is the ways the pupil talks about an area of study) the pupil already knows. This then
is the second aspect of language that is of interest, language as resource. As a
necessary prerequisite to teaching and learning, the teacher must become familiar
with the ways of knowing and wording of the pupil. Thus Barnes place emphasis on
the language the pupils use in the classroom to describe explore, question and re-
negotiate their understanding of subject areas.
From the areas of applied linguistics and sociolinguistics, there have been significant
contributions to ways of analyzing student/teacher talk. Willinsky points to a general
influence from the field of sociolinguistics on perspectives on language and learning
at school level: in particular the notion that all linguistic dialects are equal and can
thus be equally well serve the purposes of teaching and learning (Willinsky 1994: 8).
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Educationalists interested in language have also drawn on specific areas within
sociolinguistics. For example, Swann draws on specific work within sociolinguistics
on gender to explore and analyze issues surrounding talk and gender in the classroom
(see Swann 1988; see West and Zimmerman 1983). We return to this below in 2.2.3.
There have also been significant contributions from applied linguistics in offering
ways of analyzing teacher/student talk. Sinclair and Coulthard focused on talk
between the pupil and the teacher and constructing a framework for analyzing such
talk (1975). Through this framework- lesson, transaction, exchange, move, act- they
could identify patterns of teacher-pupil interaction in the classroom. They identified a
basic exchange structure, common across classrooms, the IRF structure- initiation,
response, feedback; that is, initiation by the teacher, a response by the pupils and
feedback to that response by the teacher. Stubbs pursued this focus on discourse
analysis of classroom talk, arguing that without what he perceived as the rigour of
discourse analysis, research setting out to explore classroom talk would only be
scratching the surface of talk as data (see Stubbs 1981).
The work of Edwards and Mercer (1985) and Mercer (1995) builds on both earlier
work by Barnes and Britton, as well as the discourse oriented analyses of Sinclair,
Coulthard and Stubbs. They draw on the latter in order to identify patterns of
interaction in talk, whilst emphasizing their specific and different interest in relation
to the purpose of analysis. Thus, for example, whilst Edwards and Mercer focus on
patterns of IRFs they set out to explore their significance for knowledge making in
teaching and learning, that is, in the establishment of joint understanding (Edwards
and Mercer 1985: 10). Their interest is in talk in relation to the aim of education,
which, according to Mercer, should be as follows:
the important goal of education is not to get students to take part in the conversational exchanges of educational discourse (for example IRFs), even if this is required of them on the way. It is to get students to communicate, ‘ways with words’ which will enable them to become active members of wider communities of educated discourse. 1995:81
In exploring their interest in the purposes of particular patterns of discourse, Edwards
and Mercer draw on their understanding of classroom practices thus validating Barnes
method of drawing on researcher insights into a particular context. However, by
emphasizing their interest in the ways in which teacher pupil interaction through talk
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facilitates the learning of educated discourse they problematic any straightforward
dichotomy between the pupils’ ‘own words’, suggested in the work of Barnes, and
those of subject areas. In Barnes emphasis on the pupils’ ‘own words’, there is an
underlying assumption of the romantic individual using her own words to make
meaning, connecting with what Maclure refers to as the liberal humanist perspective
on oracy for the develop of talk in schooling which Maclure refers to as oracy for
personal growth (1994: 140). In contrast, Edwards and Mercer’s emphasis on the
teacher as discourse guide represents an apprenticeship model of teaching and
learning, whereby the teacher apprentices pupils into the institution’s ways of
knowing. For this reason, Mercer argues that teaching involves the guided
construction of knowledge (1995). Teaching and learning the discourse, how to talk,
is viewed as central not separate, as might seem to be the case in some of the more
expressivist approaches, to language and learning, exemplified in the work of Barnes.
The work of Edwards and Mercer thus connects with ethnographic approaches
towards language and literacy and notions of language as social practice. This
apprenticeship model is one which we think is relevant in exploring the teaching and
learning of discourse conventions in HE.
3.1.3 Talk as social practice
Examples of a social practice view of pupil-teacher talk include the work of Mehan
and Hammersley in North American and British schools respectively. A social
practice view involves acknowledging that any instance of talk is not an autonomous
event but represents a particular way of wording, meaning, knowing and being at the
level of the particular context in which it takes place as well as at the broader societal
level of context. As Mehan states.
To practices social life is, literally, to work at its production, maintenance and transformation (Mehan 1990: 82)
Both Mehan and Hammersley foreground the relationship between particular features
of teacher/pupil classroom talk and features of on the institutional talking spaces- it is
the teacher who has the right to question, command, challenge and occupy the talking
space within the classroom with little opportunity for active participation on the part
of the pupil. In this frame, then, pupils are viewed as learning, not just the rules of
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classroom talk but to accept rather than challenge dominant cultural values and
practices.
Substantial attention has focused on the ways in which pupil/teacher talk works
towards maintaining dominant gendered practices within society. For example,
teachers have been found to address girls less frequently than boys, as well as boys
demanding more responses from the teacher; in this way routine classroom interaction
contributes to the notion and practice that boys- males- have a right not only to
dominate the social space of the classroom but in society more generally ( see for
example, Spender 1982; Swann 1992).
Studies which take a social practice view involve a range of types of analysis but
involve focusing, in some way, on specific instances of talk and locating such talk
within a wider social context. Within the field of the sociology of education,
emphasis has been placed on viewing interaction at the micro level of classrooms as
predominantly instantiations of the macro level of society (see for example
Hammersley 1977). More recently, writers within the field of language/linguistics in
education problematise any straightforward reading of macro social relations from the
micro context, through an emphasis on detailed analysis of texts of interaction. Thus
Edwards and Mercer challenge the notion of teacher dominance in talk, arguing that
the different ways in which pupils engage with the teacher in talk significantly
contributes to both what and how of talk (see also the work of Sperling 1990 on
pupil/teacher talk about writing in North American classrooms).
3.2 Learning from school based studies
In setting out to explore the significance of tutor/student face-to-face talk within the
university, we have drawn on school based studies of talk both in relation to
substantive themes and methodological approaches. What we learn from the school
based studies in relation to prominent themes, includes the following:
· Teacher/pupil talk plays a significant part in teaching and learning.
· There are dominant patterns in teacher/student talk which indicate that specific
features of talk have specific functions in the context of formal education and in
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many cases these patterns may be applicable to, and meaningful in HE as well
as the school environment.
· At the same time, what teachers and pupils do varies indicating a range of possible
types of interaction. It is not necessarily always good (or bad) to talk
· Teacher/pupil talk is not autonomous but takes place within a specific context.
This context contributes in significant ways to what the talk can do.
In relation to approaches to methodology and forms of analysis we draw in
particular on the following understandings:
· At the micro level, that is at the level of actual texts (talk as texts) it is important to
focus on patterns of talk in relation to the potential functions they serve within
the specific context of teaching and learning. However, in doing so, the insights
of the researcher/analyst are to be viewed as useful rather than a hindrance in
any interpretation of language in use.
· At the micro/macro levels, it is important to draw on a theoretical framework of
language which enables us to explore specific instances of tutor/student talk within
complex notions of context.
We now turn to consider the predominantly implicit interest in talk between tutor and
students in he to date.
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3.3 HE based research
3.3.1 Studies on student/tutor talk
In contrast to the wealth of school based research, there are few studies focusing on
student/tutor talk in HE in Britain. There have been some work on student and tutor
participation in tutorials, focusing predominantly on the amount of tutor talking time
as compared with talk by students (see for example Preston 1986, 1987; Broady
1986). Catt and Eke (1995), have recently outlined some of the ways in which talk
has been foregrounded as an important area for study at school level, and have argued
for the need to focus on tutor/student talk in initial teacher training. However, to date
their exploration has not included analyses of actual talk.
An area of growing research interest because of its introduction into teaching and
learning practices in HE is computer mediated learning.(see, for example, the journals
Computers in adult education and training and Journal of computer assisted learning).
Here, whilst not foregrounded, there is an implicit interest in student/tutor talk,
particularly through questions about the extent and ways in which tutors and students
participate in computer mediated interaction. In such studies interaction is typically
evaluated in quantitative terms, for example the number of participants in a
conference, the length of contribution (see for example Mowrer 1996). There have
also been attempts to explore patterns of computer mediated interaction in relation to
learning (see, for example Mason 1991 who attempts to evaluate contributions in
relation to educational value, such as, posing questions, presenting well argued point
of view; see Laurillard 1993 for perspective on educational technology in relation to
teaching and learning; see also Webb, Newman and Cochrane 1994 for attempt to
connect interactions with notions of deep and surface learning ).
A further example of an implicit interest in student/tutor talk is evident in Goldfinch’s
study setting out to explore the effectiveness of school-type classes with the
traditional lecture/tutorial organization of teaching and learning (1996). Effectiveness
was measured in terms of exam/course work results and student and staff preferences
were sought. On the basis of both results and preferences, school-type classes were
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considered to be more effective. Whilst Goldfinch doesn’t analyze actual instances of
student/tutor talk, her comments signal the centrality of such talk in and for learning:
The main reasons for the preference ( of both staff and students) are the chance to match the teaching pace to the students, the greater freedom to ask questions, and the improved rapport between students and staff (1996: 219)
These comments implicitly point to the importance of face-to-face talk. For example,
information and clarification seeking as well as relational talk are implied in the
above quotation. We would suggest that that the particular types of talk afforded by
the school-type class are influential in both tutors and students’ preference for such
classes over the lecture/tutorial methods.
The most explicit exploration of tutor student face-to-face talk within the context of
HE that we have found is the work of Mitchell (1996). Mitchell, elucidating on
Harre's model of personal and social development has explored the ways in which
talk between tutors and students, in Fine Art ‘crits’, contributes to the construction
both of the fine Art objects the students are producing and to the students’ sense of
self(ves) as fine artists. She refers to the tutor's role as discourse leader (153) thus
echoing Mercer in foregrounding the role of the teacher in apprenticing the student
into a particular discourse. But she differs from Mercer in emphasizing student/tutor
talk as contributing to the construction of the students’ selves as artists working
within a particular discourse. We do not pursue this dimension to talk in this paper
but have begun to explore this elsewhere (see Lillis 1998).
3.3.2 The official stance: key skills
Alongside the limited analysis of student/tutor talk in HE in Britain, it is important to
acknowledge the existence of a powerful discourse on talk in HE. In official
documentation around HE practice and provision in recent years, emphasis is not on
talk in relation to learning, as in school based studies, but rather on talk as a desirable
and discrete skill (see for example the Dearing Report- see the National Committee of
Inquiry into HE 1997- and the call for communication as one of the key skills that
universities should develop). Driven by notions of economic success and
employability, emphasis has increasingly been placed on the importance of
developing discrete skills which are seen to be necessary both for the purposes of
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academia and for the workplace (see Barnett 12994: chapter 4). The focus on key and
transferable skills has become a significant way of talking and thinking about
communication in HE. However, this focus on student development of
communication skills has been criticized for its narrow technicist stance. For
example, Barnett has criticized the official approach towards communication in
general where communication is framed in terms of means rather than as ends, and
of strategic communication rather than communication oriented to reaching a
consensus (Barnett 1992:183; see also Barnett 1994; for problematization of notion of
‘communication skills’, see Cameron 1995 ).
We would argue that given the lack of exploration of the nature of communication in
HE, set against a currently powerful official view on what communication is and
should be, there is an urgent need to focus on both actual instances of communication,
as well as desired types of communication. Our preliminary work here is intended as
a contribution.
4 A framework for exploring student-tutor talk within the socio-discursive
space of the university
As stated above (see 1) our interest is to focus on the ways in which actual discourse
practices, reflect, constitute and potentially contribute to transforming the nature of
the university. In setting out to explore the socio-discursive space of the university we
have found the work of Fairclough useful. Fairclough offers a three dimensional
framework for analyzing socio-discursive practices:
Any discursive 'event' (i.e. any instance of discourse) is seen as being simultaneously a piece of text, an instance of discursive practice, and instance of social practice. (1992:4)
Within this framework, talk between tutor and student is to be viewed not as
autonomous but as intimately bound up with the particular social context in which it
take place. Thus talk between student and tutor can be viewed as a specific instance
of language in use- text- which at the same time is constitutive both of tutor/student
relations at the context of situation and the context of culture of the university as a
social institution. Specific instances of talk thus work towards reproducing or
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transforming the nature of the particular institution in which they take place. We
would also include here the existence or not of particular types of talk- in this
instance face-to-face talk between student and tutor.
In considering the dynamic relationship between the context of culture and specific
texts, Fairclough emphasizes that the conventions underlying language use in specific
contexts are not somehow neutral but are ideologically inscribed. That is, the
conventions surrounding for example who should talk, when and how reflect
dominant values and practices within society. By drawing on them in normative
ways, participants contribute to the maintenance of existing power relations. Ivanic,
drawing on Fairclough states:
A single instance of language use draws on conventions which are determined by particular values, beliefs and practices in the context of culture. The single instance of language use thereby minutely contributes to reinforcing those values, beliefs and practices, and opposing others. (Ivanic: 1998:43)
In focusing on the possibilities for, and the nature of, student/tutor talk we are
attempting to explore such talk within the context of situation and culture of HE as
currently configured, whilst at the same time attempting to explore the nature of that
context of situation and culture. In doing so, we are conscious of the need to make
visible the conventions underlying actual talk and institutional practices in order to
explore the significance of tutor/student talk in, and for, the university.
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5 A preliminary description of the shifting socio-discursive space of one
university
In order to explore specific instances of talk, we need also to explore the nature of the
actual university at the levels of context of situation and culture in which student/tutor
talk does and as importantly, doesn’t take place. Therefore we offer here a brief and
preliminary description of several contextual dimensions of one new university which
we think are significant when considering the significance of talk in, and for, HE.
5.1 Increasing student numbers/decreasing opportunities for face-to-face talk
The growth in the number of students and the wider diversity of social backgrounds
of the students attending HE is well documented (see for example HEFCE Report
1996; DFEE 1998). Whilst recent available figures do not point to this increase in
numbers as having a major impact on staff-student ratios and hence the nature of
tutor/student talking spaces ( DFEE figures point to a shift from 14:1 to about 16-1),
personal accounts by tutors’ point to having to teach an increasing number of
students, alongside decreasing opportunities for face-to-face communication, either in
formally allotted tutorial time or informal opportunities because of workload. This
can be illustrated by the experience of one of us, working as a lecturer in the ‘new
university’ we are exploring. Over a period of 8 years the size of seminar groups has
nearly doubled (going from groups of about 12 in 1990, to of 18-20 in 1998).
Furthermore, the time allotted for each seminar has decreased from 2 hours to 1.5
hours. The total teaching time for each student on each unit has typically changed
from 23 hours of lectures and 46 hours of seminars in a year to 10 hours of lectures
and 15 hours of seminars. Personal tutorials have been abolished, to be replaced with
a centralized student support system. The yearly intake of students on the degree in
question has increased substantially (nearly doubled) since 1990 without any increase
in numbers of teaching staff. Not surprisingly, it is almost a daily complaint of
teaching staff that they cannot teach subjects in the same depth as a decade ago, nor
do they feel they are able to really get to know their students.
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5.2 The real and virtual campus
Physically the ‘new university’ is in the process of shifting to the centre of the city. It
therefore stands in contrast to its principal previous location and one common to
many university sites, that is, in the leafy suburbs distant from the heart of the city.
Thus, on the face of it, the university, as well as allowing access to people from social
groups historically excluded, can be seen to be moving towards the masses. However,
there are tensions around any presumed wider access, both in relation to the nature of
students’ participation in learning in HE and evident in the university as both physical
and virtual space. We return to the former in our discussion in 5. Here we wish to
comment on the physical space against the backdrop of significant shifts towards a
virtual space.
Cursory observations of the way space is organized within this new centrally located
building indicate contradictory messages. Consider for example the implications of
staff now working in large open plan offices: unlike in older buildings with staff in
smaller offices and where students tended to knock directly on doors, students now
have to make appointments through a reception type area. In some instances, student
access is strictly prohibited.
Secondly, whilst physically the university is closer to more people’s daily activity
(the railway station, the bus station, shops, cinemas) there is a significant shift
towards the notion and practices of a ‘virtual campus’. By ‘virtual campus’, we mean
any teaching and learning practices predominantly mediated by the use of computers
and where it is assumed teacher and learner will share virtual rather than real physical
space. That this is a strategic decision is clear from official policy statements and
reflected in the nature of curriculum projects funded by the central institute of the
university to support teaching and learning.
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5.3 Research signaling need for talk/human contact
At the same time that the above significant changes are occurring- the university
growing in size and diversity of student population, the shift towards the virtual
campus- research reports emerging from this university on the student experience in
HE point to desires for greater tutor/student face-to-face contact. Thus Ottewill’s
work (in progress) focusing on exploring the transition from school to HE, highlights
students’ desire for greater individual guidance and support from tutors; Allen and
Spriggs (in progress) in exploring the experience of part time students through
questionnaires, found that a recurring theme was the students’ desire for more face-
to-face contact with their tutors; Parmakis, in a recent study using questionnaires to
explore student retention and progression, found that there was substantial
dissatisfaction with the amount and type of tutor ‘feedback’ ( Parmakis 1997);
Johnson, in research setting out to explore students’ experience of providing feedback
to lecturers points to the students’ wish for more meaningful, participate,
relationships with tutors (see Johnson 1998).
There is also locally based research which points to tutors’ desires for more face-to-
face contact with students. Bingham, in work exploring tutors’ practices and
perspectives on open and distance learning, refers to tutors’ calls for greater student
support, effective models of student support in helping the students to use open
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learning materials. In relation to the increasing emphasis on open and distance
learning materials, Bingham comments as follows:
There was a strong feeling that whilst the materials may replace the delivery of information, thereby challenging the traditional role of the tutor, staff now focus more on drawing out learning and understanding. (1997)
Implicit in staff comments highlighted in this report is the assumption that talk
between staff and students is the chief means of providing the support that students
need in order to achieve greater understanding, echoing Goldfinch’s study referred to
in 2.2.1
All of the above works do not focus explicitly on student/tutor face-to-face talk.
However, they implicitly signal the importance and significance attached to such talk
and, hence, we would argue of the need to explore the purposes of actual talk.
5.4 Students’ comments on the talking space
As stated in the introduction, the idea for this paper grew out of a research project not
on talk, but on student writing. The students involved in the study were all ‘non-
traditional students in their first year of an HE course2. A recurring them across
student-writers’ accounts of their experience of engaging in academic writing, was
their dissatisfaction with the kind of talking space with tutors that they encountered.
Here are some examples of their comments which point to dissatisfaction in specific
relation to the teaching and learning of the dominant literacy practice in HE, that of
essayist literacy 3. The students’ concern is to find out the demands surrounding the
essay questions they were being set;
Example 1 Tara
2 We are usng the term ‘non-traditional’ to signal that the students involved were from social groupings historically excluded from HE in Britain.
3 For elucidation and discussion of essayist literacy, see Scollon and Scollon 1981; Gee 1996.
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He (tutor) goes on the board then and said..erm..This is how you do it, introduction, main body, conclusion, that’s it. Go off and do it now.’So we all said to ourselves ‘thanks very much, like, you’re a bloody big help.
Example 2 TaraI’ve asked loads of questions (about how to interpret ‘advise’ in the wording of the essay question) but they said, ‘you advise him’ and I said, ‘yeah, but do I speak to him so I’m giving him the advice’, or..?.He said, ‘Well, if you do that then you won’t get all the acts done.’ So..he just couldn’t be bothered I assume.
Example 3 DianeI even said to the woman in the seminar, and I said, you know when you give these questions out, it’s like you’re trying to trick students, like, that doesn’t look how, it doesn’t say, I don’t mean talk about what stereotype is, just talk about the causes and effects.
Example 4 NadiaN: I'm not really taking them (the verbal and written comments made by the tutor ) into account.T: Ignoring her? Why?N: Ignoring her basically. If I could go and talk to her about it then maybe I'd take them into consideration, but I'm glad I actually changed from her to somebody else.(My emphasis).
Example 1 is an extreme example of the monologic talking space between student and
tutor; the tutor makes only a minimal effort to teach the students the conventions
surrounding student essay writing and makes no attempt to find out students’ current
state of understanding about such rules in order to, build bridges between existing and
new knowledge/practices. In the remaining three examples, whilst there are
opportunities for individual face-to-face talk between students and tutors, there is
clearly dissatisfaction with such talk. In example 2, whilst there is space for
questioning and answering, the student feels frustrated by the lack of shared meanings
about the nature of the task and assumes minimal interest on the part of the tutor. In
example 3, the student is again frustrated but this time by what she views as the
apparent unwillingness on the part of the tutor to simply state things as they are.
Example 4 indicates clearly that the student desires a different kind of talking space
with the tutor. Here Nadia doesn’t view the tutor’s talk as meaningful ‘talk’; for
although she has talked with the tutor she states if I could go and talk to here about it.
She clearly desires a different type of talking relationship, even though she is not
explicit about what this might be/involve.
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From our preliminary exploration of the nature of the socio-discursive space in
relation to face-to-face student/tutor talk, we suggest that within the increasingly
complex and shifting socio-discursive space of the university, there is increased
institutional emphasis on reducing the possibilities for face-to-face talk between
individual students and tutors alongside significant indications of a desire for such
talk, on the part of both tutors and students.
In the next section we focus on instances of talk to explore what it is in talk that
students , and tutors, may desire. We acknowledge that there will be many reasons
that students and tutors desire face-to-face talk, not least talk as a form of human
contact (see Ashworth 1998). However, our aim here is to explore why talk may be
desired in relation to the teaching and learning of the particular literacy practice
demanded in HE, which we refer to throughout as essayist literacy (see endnote 3).
From this study and studies elsewhere the conventions surrounding essayist literacy
are not transparent and are not easily taught/learned. They are particularly not easily
taught/learned through type of talking space student-writers reported.
6. Talking to teach and learn
As stated in the introduction, the idea for this paper grew out of a research project
exploring students’ experiences around academic writing (see Lillis 1998). Alongside
the research aims of the study, a further explicit aim was for the tutor-researcher
(henceforward in this paper referred to as tutor) to teach the student-writer the
conventions of student academic writing. The talk between student-writer and tutor-
thus represents the type of institutional opportunities for talk that both students, in
this study and in the studies mentioned in 4.3 , seem to desire, although, it is
important to add, feel they do not have. Our aim in this section is to explore specific
extracts of talk between one student and the tutor in order what is being done in the
talk and how such talk constitutes (or not) teaching and learning.
6.1 Talking to do academic literacy with Sara
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A major concern of all the students in the study was how to respond to the ‘essay
question’. Much tutor/student talk therefore focused on exploring whether the student
seemed to be responding in, what the tutor considered to be, an appropriate way to
the essay question. In this section we will focus on extracts from talk between one
tutor, Theresa with one student, Sara. The extracts have been selected because they
contain specific features and purposes which were common across tutor/student talk.
In the extracts the tutor and student are talking about Sara’s draft responses to the
following essay question:
Essay question
Discuss the ways in which different linguistic environments affect the development of bilingualism in pre-school (under 5 years) children.
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I hope that by the end of this assignment I may have come to some sort of conclusion, as to why some children are proficient in some languages and notothers. (Se2d1: 40-44)
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T: That doesn’t seem to me to be really what you’re doing.(Re-reads section)S: What about linguistically capable?T: But you’re talking about a specific group of children aren’t you?S: Bilingual children.T: Right, so I think you need to be specific here as to why someS: [bilingual children, would that be better?T: Well let’s try and follow that through.Some bilingual children areS: [well, yeah. I mean some bilingual children are proficient in some languages and not others.T: But if you’ve already called them bilingual, you’ve got a problem there.S: Yeah, well but the business about what is bilingual though. I mean, who is considered a bilingual, when are you bilingual?T: Right okay, let’s take it like that.(T re-reads section)T: Have you come to any conclusion about what might be the best environment?S: Yes. I mean, there were some things in there that I thought that’s a good idea, I could use that myself.T: Well, don’t you think then that what you’re saying is I may have come to some sort of conclusion as to why certain environment help children to become bilingual more than others. Isn’t that what you’re doing?...S: I think that’s probably what I’m trying to say but I haven’t written it down properly.T. It’s just that, what you’ve written here is too vague. (T reads extract) The second reason given here should be the key.(contd)
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Extract from text Talk about text contd.1112131415
what effects different environments have on their development (Se2d1:55)
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S: Yeah ( sounds unsure).So if I said erm that by the end of the assignment I may have some ideaT: [as to why some children...S: erm...T: develop bilingual skills and what effect that has on their development. I mean that’s what you’re talking about,
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aren’t you?S: How they develop bilingual skills.T: YeahS: Can I write that down or I’ll forget.S: (Writes) As to why, no... how some children develop bilingual skills.T: I think that’s much more what you’re saying... and then what effects.S: Yeah. ( Writes) (Se2disd1side 2:268).
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4 Conventions used for transcribing the talk. , ?Conventions of punctuation used to
indicate in writing my understanding of the sense of the spoken words (see Halliday
1989:90) Tinitial of person speakingunderliningword
stressed[overlaps/interruptions...long pause (longer than 2 seconds)(sounds
unsure)transcriber’s comments for additional description*unclear speech---gap in data
transcribed
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the way she is using the word bilingual (line 19), working with the tutor to model text
(lines 44-54).
A feature common across the tutor’s talk with student-writers is her repetition of
wordings from the essay question. This is a seemingly obvious way of constructing
unity within the practice of essayist literacy, but is not necessarily something the
student-writers think of doing. In the figure below, we outline the way in which the
tutor cues key wordings from the essay question for Sara to include in her written
text.
Working at constructing textual unity: wordings from essay question in student-tutor talk
Student- Sara Tutor- Theresa
children (text) cues ‘bilingual’ (line 5, spoken)
bilingual children(spoken)
repetition bilingual children and
introduces proficient (from text and
essay question)
takes up develop
repetition bilingual children (line 12)
introduces environment
repetition environment
introduces develop and development
The arrows indicate the introduction and take up of specific wordings in the talk and
although not the focus of the discussion here, these wordings are also taken up by
Sara in her final written draft .
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A significant feature of the talk in extract 1 above, and a significant means by which
the tutor talks the student into this practice, is the way in which the tutor-researcher,
insists that she knows what the student-writer is trying to say as compared with what
the student-writer actually does say, either orally or in her written text. This connects
closely with what Edwards and Mercer, in their analysis of school-teacher talk, have
called reconstructive paraphrasing (Edwards and Mercer 1985: chapter 7) . This is a
process whereby the tutor reconstructs the meanings the student is making in order to
bring them in line with institutionally preferred meanings. Thus, in the episode above,
the tutor opens and closes this episode by suggesting that she knows what Sara is
trying to say as compared with what she has written. The tutor also does this at line 1
That doesn’t seem to me to be really what you’re doing; at line 31, don’t you think
that what you’re saying is; at line 52, I mean that’s what you’re talking about, aren’t
you; at line 59 I think that’s much more what you’re saying. In closing the episode the
tutor suggests that all of the talk has been about making Sara’s intended meanings
textually explicit. Sara’s comment at line 37, I think that’s probably what I’m trying
to say but I haven’t written it down properly indicates that she is willing to accept the
tutor’s interpretation of what she is saying, although probably indicates her doubt
about whether the tutor, and perhaps she, knows her intended meanings. It may be the
case that, based on a reading of her notes, headings, rough drafts the tutor was
convinced that she understood the question and that much of her material was
relevant. However, knowing that Sara understood the intention of the question and
that much of her draft was relevant, is different from knowing what it is she is trying
to mean/meant at any one moment in time. In working at securing an institutionally
acceptable focus, the talk exemplifies what Edwards and Mercer refer to as the
teacher’s dilemma (Edwards and Mercer 1985:130), where the teacher is often
engaged in the balancing act of listening out for what the student might want to mean
whilst at the same time working at imposing a particular way of meaning.
How this dilemma is enacted can be further illustrated in the following extract, from
the same talk session as above. The tutor opens the sequence by questioning the
relevance of Sara’s definition of bilingualism -which we had begun to explore in the
talk above- to the essay question.
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I personally maintain the idea that if a person can communicate in all the languages they possess and can in turn be understood may resume the title of a bilingual (Se2d1:69-74)
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S reads text.S:That’s my view and what I think for a person to considered bilingual.T: Why is this bit relevant to the question?S: (S rereads section) Well it depends, because here’s different types of bilingual children, well looking through, there’s active, passive and another one, three different sorts of, if you like, proficiency in bilingualism. There’s one, the passive one where the child can, er, communicate, you know, in the other language but cannot read and write, you know, and there’s the active, active yeah, I think, where the child can actually read and write in the other language, I thinkT: [well, don’t forget, we’re talking about children under five. So reading and writing is not that relevant.S: I mean in future, these things will obviously affect the childT: [right fineS: [I mean these are the first stepping stones towards being a balanced bilingual and you’ve got to consider this before you actually go into it.T: Right, so somehow we need a link between what you’ve said here. It may be, in order to become bilingual using this definition, the linguistic environment in which the child finds itself will be of crucial importance. You’ve got to link this to where the essay is going. Just now you’ve explained it, you’ve said depending on where you want to go, that has major implications for the sorts of linguistic environment you’re going to try and set up. So that needs to go there(S.marks her text.T reads heading.).contd.
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T: For a child to become bilingual in the long term there will be major implications for the sort of linguistic environment that is required, or something like that. I’m just thinking that you talk here about different situations. So you need to say something about the range ofS [different situationsT: [which will have implications for the type of bilingualism which they will develop. Somehow you need that link there.Do you see what I mean?S: Yeah (sounds unsure)T: Or not?S: Definitely. I see what you mean. (Se 2disd1:5)
This extract has typical features of student-tutor talk found in the previous extract: the
tutor directing the sequence through IRFs at lines ; modelling text; using, what we
understand in this institutional context as, directives- don’t forget, you need, you’ve
got to.
There is also an instance of reconstructive paraphrasing which is central in the tutor’s
attempts at securing an acceptable unity within essayist literacy. Thus, at line 4, the
tutor is still not sure what Sara’s intended meaning is or indeed whether Sara has an
intended meaning or is working at meaning. The tutor pursues her reference to
reading and writing, rejecting its relevance. Sara responds by explaining why it is
relevant. Her wording in future seems to enable the tutor to get closer to what she
understands to be her intended meaning. The tutor reflects this back to her at lines 32-
41 pushing it textually closer to the central focus of the essay question -the
development of bilingualism- with the wordings in order to become bilingual.
In this sequence, then the tutor and student-writer move from a written personal
definition of bilingual couched in general terms- can communicate in all the
languages they possess- to a verbal statement where Sara demonstrates her knowledge
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of the more complex definitions of bilingual; to a verbal explanation/clue in future-as
to why Sara considers reference to reading and writing to be relevant, alongside an
ambiguous use of these things; to the tutor’s transformation in order to become
bilingual and then move to textual modelling.
In re-examining the wordings in this extract, Theresa found it difficult to explain how
or why she came to understand in future as in order to become bilingual or to know
what sense she was making of Sara’s these things and these. What do these things,
these refer to? Reading, writing, active passive bilingual? It may be that these non-
specific wordings indicate that Sara is working at meaning making at the moment of
talk, whilst Theresa as tutor, am drawing on what Gee refers to as the guessing
principle to work at sense making within this context:
We can only make judgements about what others (and ourselves) mean by a word used on a given occasion by guessing what other words the word is mean t to exclude or not exclude. (Gee 1996:74)
But clearly such guessing is influenced by another of Gee’s principles, that of
context. In the talk with Sara, Theresa as tutor is not only trying to understand what
Sara is saying but drawing heavily on what she considers to be acceptable for her to
do within the practice of essayist literacy and within the field of Language Studies, in
order to make sense, in particular to construct what counts as textual unity. An
indication of this is at line 36, when the tutor says Just now you’ve explained it,
you’ve said depending on where you want to go. She had, in fact, said, in future .
This seems to be an instance of making meaning which involves the following
dynamic: the student-writer making meaning at the moment of talk; the tutor
investing a student-writer’s words with a particular meaning in accordance with a
particular area of study, which is in turn bound up with the socio-discursive context
of essayist literacy ; the tutor then modelling written text orally. Although she has her
doubts, Sara colludes with what the tutor is doing, because as someone learning the
rules she is prepared to follow the tutor in the doing of essayist literacy, although
unsure about the reasons.
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Based on a preliminary exploration of the socio-discursive space of one university,
we would argue that there is a substantial shift away from the practice of tutors and
students engaging in face-to-face talk, the significance of which has yet to be fully
understood. On the basis of analysis of actual instances of student/tutor talk we
suggest that such face-to-face talk plays a central part in the teaching and learning
process in the following ways.
· Talk between a tutor- a knowledgeable insider- and a student who is unfamiliar
with particular educational practices, in this case, academic writing, enables the
student to engage in specific educational practices, the practice of academic
writing. This is consistent with the apprenticeship model of teacher-pupil in
interaction discussed by Mercer (see 2.1.2).
· Particular discourse patterns of the talk signal the doing of this practice-
reconstructive paraphrasing, cued elicitation, textual modelling. We would
suggest that it is talk as doing teaching and learning which marks such talk as
useful and desirable for teaching and learning, as compared with talk which
emphasizes the telling of how to do something.
· Providing institutional space for students and tutors to engage in the doing of
educational practices is of particular importance to those students who are least
familiar with dominant practices in HE. Talk as doing may facilitate access to
the university’s symbolic resources, and significantly enhance the participation
of so called ‘non-traditional’ students, that is students who may be least familiar
with the discourse conventions of HE.
In arguing for talk as apprenticeship into the discourse practices of HE, as a means
of ensuring access to the university’s symbolic resources, we are conscious of the
inherent paradox in such an apprenticeship. For whilst such apprenticeship may
ensure access, it also constitutes socialization into dominant practices of HE,
potentially excluding alternative ways of knowing, being and doing within the
university (see Lillis 1997). The potential for tutor/student talk to be
transformative is to be explored elsewhere.
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Given the lack of explicit analysis of student/tutor talk in HE alongside the existence
of a powerful official discourse on the nature and function of communication in
general in HE, we would like to conclude by calling for further and more extensive
studies of actual instances of talk to be carried out. In particular, there is a need to
critically explore the ways in which the (lack of) opportunities for particular types of
talk between students and tutors contributes to the nature of student participation in
HE and the nature of HE itself.
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