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DESCRIPTION
*UPDATED*TRANSCRIPT
Intro Verse 1 Bridge 1 Chorus 1 Verse 2 Bridge 2 Chorus 2 Breakdown Chorus 3
Duration 00:00 – 00:06 00:06 – 00:16 00:16 – 00:28 00:28 – 00:54 00:54 – 01:05 01:05 – 01:16 01:16 – 01:46 01:46 – 02:42 02:42 – 03:26
Action Narrative:Boyfriend
coming home to his house
Performance:none
Narrative:Boyfriend still walking home with cutaways
to girlfriend cheating.
Performance:Lead singer in the street, lip
syncing behind BF
Narrative:BF reaches the door to house, GF knows she is about to be
caught
Performance:Entire band
performing in an empty room
Narrative:BF and GF have
argument about her
cheating on him, he leaves.
Performance:Close up on lead singers
face, cut between this and narrative. Short takes of
the entire band - Pans
Narrative:BF is walking, gets text from GF and throws
his phone in anger.
Performance:None
Narrative:Cut to before the argument. GF is beginning to cheat on the
BF. GF and other lover
drop onto bed.Performance:
None
Narrative:GF and other
lover kissing in the bedroom,
cuts to BF kneel and puts head in handsPerformance:Entire band in a mix of close
ups, long shots and mid shots
Narrative:Cutaway
between the BF getting up on a morning, here he gets invited to a
party, and in at the party.
Once people begin to open the doors, GF turns up and
BF opens door.Performance:Close up on lead singer,
swaying camera - Handheld
Narrative:GF and BF go back upstairs
to argue. Short takes of BF and GF messing up the room and things of that sort. BF leaves and slams door
on the last beat.
Performance:Band
performing in the empty
room
Cast GF and BF Lead singer, GF, BF and Other lover
BF, GF and Other Lover
GF and BF BF GF and Other Lover
Other Lover and GF. BF
BF, Party Extras, GF
GF and BF
Costumes/ Props
Shirt + Jeans (Lighter colours)Headphones
BF - shirts + jeans (Lighter Colours)GF – Baggy Shirt, Red LipstickHeadphonesMicrophone
BF - shirts + jeans (Lighter Colours)GF – Baggy shirt, Red LipstickInstruments
BF - shirts + jeans (Lighter Colours)GF- Baggy shirt, Red LipstickMicrophone
Shirts + jeans (Darker colours – changed) and a hoodiePhone
Casual costumes (shirts + jeans)
Casual costumes (shirts + jeans) and a hoodieInstruments
PyjamasFoodPhoneCups + bottlesSmart ClothesMicrophone
Casual costumes (shirts + jeans)Instruments
Treatment – “Hands and Faces” – The Used
Location Streets House/FlatBedroom
StreetBedroomEmpty Room
Bedroom Alley Bedroom BedroomAlleyEmpty room
KitchenPartyStreets
BedroomEmpty room
Possible Problems
Pieces could come off the phone when it is thrown.
People might get hurt as they fall
A lot of extras can be hard to manage, need to keep a close eye
People might get hurt in the throwing.