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Intro Verse 1 Bridge 1 Chorus 1 Verse 2 Bridge 2 Chorus 2 Breakdown Chorus 3 Duration 00:00 – 00:06 00:06 – 00:16 00:16 – 00:28 00:28 – 00:54 00:54 – 01:05 01:05 – 01:16 01:16 – 01:46 01:46 – 02:42 02:42 – 03:26 Action Narrative: Boyfriend coming home to his house Performanc e: none Narrative: Boyfriend still walking home with cutaways to girlfriend cheating. Performanc e: Lead singer in the street, lip syncing behind BF Narrative: BF reaches the door to house, GF knows she is about to be caught Performanc e: Entire band performing in an empty room Narrative: BF and GF have argument about her cheating on him, he leaves. Performanc e: Close up on lead singers face, cut between this and narrative. Short takes of the entire band - Pans Narrative: BF is walking, gets text from GF and throws his phone in anger. Performanc e: None Narrative: Cut to before the argument. GF is beginning to cheat on the BF. GF and other lover drop onto bed. Performanc e: None Narrative: GF and other lover kissing in the bedroom, cuts to BF kneel and puts head in hands Performanc e: Entire band in a mix of close ups, long shots and mid shots Narrative: Cutaway between the BF getting up on a morning, here he gets invited to a party, and in at the party. Once people begin to open the doors, GF turns up and BF opens door. Performanc e: Close up on lead singer, swaying camera - Narrative: GF and BF go back upstairs to argue. Short takes of BF and GF messing up the room and things of that sort. BF leaves and slams door on the last beat. Performanc e: Band performing in the empty room Treatment – “Hands and Faces” – The

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Page 1: Editied Treatment

Intro Verse 1 Bridge 1 Chorus 1 Verse 2 Bridge 2 Chorus 2 Breakdown Chorus 3

Duration 00:00 – 00:06 00:06 – 00:16 00:16 – 00:28 00:28 – 00:54 00:54 – 01:05 01:05 – 01:16 01:16 – 01:46 01:46 – 02:42 02:42 – 03:26

Action Narrative:Boyfriend

coming home to his house

Performance:none

Narrative:Boyfriend still walking home with cutaways

to girlfriend cheating.

Performance:Lead singer in the street, lip

syncing behind BF

Narrative:BF reaches the door to house, GF knows she is about to be

caught

Performance:Entire band

performing in an empty room

Narrative:BF and GF have

argument about her

cheating on him, he leaves.

Performance:Close up on lead singers

face, cut between this and narrative. Short takes of

the entire band - Pans

Narrative:BF is walking, gets text from GF and throws

his phone in anger.

Performance:None

Narrative:Cut to before the argument. GF is beginning to cheat on the

BF. GF and other lover

drop onto bed.Performance:

None

Narrative:GF and other

lover kissing in the bedroom,

cuts to BF kneel and puts head in handsPerformance:Entire band in a mix of close

ups, long shots and mid shots

Narrative:Cutaway

between the BF getting up on a morning, here he gets invited to a

party, and in at the party.

Once people begin to open the doors, GF turns up and

BF opens door.Performance:Close up on lead singer,

swaying camera - Handheld

Narrative:GF and BF go back upstairs

to argue. Short takes of BF and GF messing up the room and things of that sort. BF leaves and slams door

on the last beat.

Performance:Band

performing in the empty

room

Cast GF and BF Lead singer, GF, BF and Other lover

BF, GF and Other Lover

GF and BF BF GF and Other Lover

Other Lover and GF. BF

BF, Party Extras, GF

GF and BF

Costumes/ Props

Shirt + Jeans (Lighter colours)Headphones

BF - shirts + jeans (Lighter Colours)GF – Baggy Shirt, Red LipstickHeadphonesMicrophone

BF - shirts + jeans (Lighter Colours)GF – Baggy shirt, Red LipstickInstruments

BF - shirts + jeans (Lighter Colours)GF- Baggy shirt, Red LipstickMicrophone

Shirts + jeans (Darker colours – changed) and a hoodiePhone

Casual costumes (shirts + jeans)

Casual costumes (shirts + jeans) and a hoodieInstruments

PyjamasFoodPhoneCups + bottlesSmart ClothesMicrophone

Casual costumes (shirts + jeans)Instruments

Treatment – “Hands and Faces” – The Used

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Location Streets House/FlatBedroom

StreetBedroomEmpty Room

Bedroom Alley Bedroom BedroomAlleyEmpty room

KitchenPartyStreets

BedroomEmpty room

Possible Problems

Pieces could come off the phone when it is thrown.

People might get hurt as they fall

A lot of extras can be hard to manage, need to keep a close eye

People might get hurt in the throwing.