CLASS & TEACHER FEEDBACK ON THE ROUGH CUT

IMPROVEMENTS MADE

IMPROVEMENT 1.

•The audience felt we spent too much time on this shot in the beginning of the video

To tackle this problem we cut more to a mid-shot of the singer and also placed an effect over the beginning that flashed in time with the music and zoomed into the shot more. This improved this section.

IMPROVEMENT 2.

•The audience felt we needed more shot variety as these were the main shots of the lead singer used throughout, which made the video too repetitive.

To tackle this issue we included more of the layered shots that the audience appeared to like. As well as this, we included more shots of instruments throughout the video. We also used more of a variety in the styles of shot that we used.

IMPROVEMENT 3

The audience felt that the video was too long and needed shortening so that is maintained their interest more.

To solve this problem, we cut out roughly the last 40 seconds of the song.

These are the lyrics that were cut off the end.