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ENGLISH I

March 23rd through 27th

Monday, March 23rd

JournalDLPFinish processing on JabberwockyLyric Poetry

Journal 5

Give a movie review of O Brother Where Art Thou. A movie review discusses the strengths and weaknesses of a work; it is not a summary.

Proofreading Warm-up

Item 13Make alot of rash decisions.

CorrectedThey make a lot of rash decisions. (sentence revised)

Proofreading Warm-up

Item 14Doesn’t it seem like Romeo love Juliet more then he love life itself.

CorrectedDoesn’t it seem as though Romeo loves Juliet more than he loves

life itself?

Tuesday, March 24th

JournalDLPVocabulary QuizPoetry Project Introduction Finish Lyric Poetry

Journal 6

What’s the worst decision you have ever made? What is the best decision you have ever made?

Proofreading Warm-up

Item 12Where’s the gold scarfs for the girls costumes.

CorrectedWhere are the gold scarves for the girls’ costumes?

Proofreading Warm-up

Item 13Their is in mine opinion no flower more prettier then a marigold.

CorrectedThere is, in my opinion, no flower prettier than a marigold. (more

deleted)

Wednesday, March 25th

JournalDLPNarrative Poetry

Journal 7

Tell a scary story

Proofreading Warm-up

Item 14In rural maryland where this story takes place life does not run

smooth, or easy for most people.

CorrectedIn rural Maryland, where this story takes place, life does not run

smoothly or easily for most people. (comma after smooth deleted)

Proofreading Warm-up

Item 15It seemed like no one never gone to see Miss Lottie or her son.

CorrectedIt seemed as if no one ever went to see Miss Lottie or her son.

Thursday, March 26th

Journal DLPMetaphorsSimiles

Journal 8

What do you think is the most important thing to have in life? Discuss tangible and intangible things.

Proofreading Warm-up

Item 1The nieghbors would not cenceed that the strip of land was not

there’s.

CorrectedThe neighbors would not concede that the strip of land was not

theirs.

Proofreading Warm-up

Item 2The night was cold and windy and the wolfs in the forest was

howling.

CorrectedThe night was cold and windy, and the wolves in the forest were

howling.

Friday, March 27th

JournalDLPLimericksHaikus

Journal 9

FREE WRITE FRIDAY

Ideas: Write a short story Write me a letter Write about how your week went Write about your plans for the weekend

Proofreading Warm-up

Item 3neither of the men were able to get loose from the tangle of fallen

branchs.

CorrectedNeither of the men was able to get loose from the tangle of fallen

branches.

Proofreading Warm-up

Item 4from who did she borrow the necklace

CorrectedFrom whom did she borrow the necklace?