6.2 peer editing worksheet
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PeerEditingWorksheet
Readthenarrativethoroughly,makingnotesinthemarginthatdescribeyourimmediatereactionstowhat'swritten.Thenanswerthesequestions:
1. Didthenarrativefocusonaspecificmomentofthetimelineorsumuptheentirelife
storyofthebrownfield?Wasthismethoddoneeffectively?
2. Didtheopeningparagraphcatchmyattention?Howcanthisbeimproved?
3. Doesthepaperflow?Whattransitionsneedtobeimproved?
4. Didyourpartnerutilizepersonificationtechniquesattemptedimagery?Citeexamples.
5. Istheretoolittleinformation?WhatdoIwanttohearmoreabout?
6. Whatcanbetakenoutofthenarrative?
7. Arethereanygrammarorpunctuationerrors?Wherearethey?NOTES: